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Hello, I think your article is off to a great start! One thing I will point out is the Citation or reference you used that links to Tutta Bella website. I learned from people who have been leaving me notes on Wikipedia that we cannot use a company's page for reference because it looks like awe are advertising for them. Also, do you work for this place? If so, I think we have to make a note somewhere on the Talk Page to say that? You can also check with Mako. Also, I think the first section can use more content other than the locations. Maybe consider merging the "History" part with the first section and that serve sort of as the "About" section? Just a thought. Otherwise, nice job! :) Elephant 16 ( talk) 23:36, 24 October 2014 (UTC)
Hi I think the article is very informative. I'm surprised the chain didn't have their own page. I agree with Elephant16 above. Chat with Mako regarding your affiliation with the chain and if you can use it to reference the information. It seems like it would be ok but I would double check. How about adding some more information for each of the location like addresses and telephone numbers instead of just the neighborhoods. I would also want to see the menu be listed or some of their popular dishes. Maybe do a side bar information box like the way I have done it on my page for Asiana Flight 733. Check Olive Garden's restaurant page for an example as well. You can also possibly use the logo the way OG has done it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xxdboixx ( talk • contribs) 04:05, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
Hello ElizavetaSouslova! When I saw your article, I got really excited because Tutta Bella Neapolitan Pizzeria is one of my favorite restaurants. Their pizza is amazing and they definitely deserve to have a Wikipedia article. I only go to the Crossroads location and I had no idea they had that many locations in Washington state. I like how you have separated the article into sections, such as purpose, history, menu, community and donations and recognition. It was interesting to learn more about Tutta Bella by reading your article. Thank you! Lap91 ( talk) 08:22, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
Привет, Елизавета! I agree with all of the above, both the complements and the suggestions for improvement. I made edits to the page, mostly to improve the neutral tone and overall flow. To help further, you might want to check out the example of Pagliacci Pizza ... Mlaboda ( talk) 14:05, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
HI @ ElizavetaSouslova:
Very nice! It sounds like you have an insider's account of what goes on at Tutta Bella. Some of the content seems like it would be best left for their website, but the presidential visit and the Verace Pizza Napoletana certification are definitely worth mentioning. I would perhaps mention that they were the first pizza proprietors in Seattle to receive the certification (if you can find a reliable source for this), but perhaps you should leave out that they are the only ones to have this certification. Things may change in the future and I would not want your wiki to be inaccurate. Uclisa ( talk) 05:55, 28 October 2014 (UTC)
Hey @ ElizavetaSouslova: I just have a few comments on your article:
Thanks for your work! Adam (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 20:55, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
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Hello, I think your article is off to a great start! One thing I will point out is the Citation or reference you used that links to Tutta Bella website. I learned from people who have been leaving me notes on Wikipedia that we cannot use a company's page for reference because it looks like awe are advertising for them. Also, do you work for this place? If so, I think we have to make a note somewhere on the Talk Page to say that? You can also check with Mako. Also, I think the first section can use more content other than the locations. Maybe consider merging the "History" part with the first section and that serve sort of as the "About" section? Just a thought. Otherwise, nice job! :) Elephant 16 ( talk) 23:36, 24 October 2014 (UTC)
Hi I think the article is very informative. I'm surprised the chain didn't have their own page. I agree with Elephant16 above. Chat with Mako regarding your affiliation with the chain and if you can use it to reference the information. It seems like it would be ok but I would double check. How about adding some more information for each of the location like addresses and telephone numbers instead of just the neighborhoods. I would also want to see the menu be listed or some of their popular dishes. Maybe do a side bar information box like the way I have done it on my page for Asiana Flight 733. Check Olive Garden's restaurant page for an example as well. You can also possibly use the logo the way OG has done it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xxdboixx ( talk • contribs) 04:05, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
Hello ElizavetaSouslova! When I saw your article, I got really excited because Tutta Bella Neapolitan Pizzeria is one of my favorite restaurants. Their pizza is amazing and they definitely deserve to have a Wikipedia article. I only go to the Crossroads location and I had no idea they had that many locations in Washington state. I like how you have separated the article into sections, such as purpose, history, menu, community and donations and recognition. It was interesting to learn more about Tutta Bella by reading your article. Thank you! Lap91 ( talk) 08:22, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
Привет, Елизавета! I agree with all of the above, both the complements and the suggestions for improvement. I made edits to the page, mostly to improve the neutral tone and overall flow. To help further, you might want to check out the example of Pagliacci Pizza ... Mlaboda ( talk) 14:05, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
HI @ ElizavetaSouslova:
Very nice! It sounds like you have an insider's account of what goes on at Tutta Bella. Some of the content seems like it would be best left for their website, but the presidential visit and the Verace Pizza Napoletana certification are definitely worth mentioning. I would perhaps mention that they were the first pizza proprietors in Seattle to receive the certification (if you can find a reliable source for this), but perhaps you should leave out that they are the only ones to have this certification. Things may change in the future and I would not want your wiki to be inaccurate. Uclisa ( talk) 05:55, 28 October 2014 (UTC)
Hey @ ElizavetaSouslova: I just have a few comments on your article:
Thanks for your work! Adam (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 20:55, 27 October 2014 (UTC)