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someone should mention something about the incident in which he was suspended ten games for leaving the bench during a fight
I don't have a problem with you adding what you're adding, personally, because I really couldn't give to sh*ts about Bertuzzi or the 'Steve Moore Incident'. Hockey really doesn't interest me. I am removing your edits because you clearly do not grasp the concept of weasel words. When you use phrases like, "some people say" or "media outlets say", you're presenting hearsay information by way of weasel words. When you add the sentences, use phraseology that indicates WHO said WHAT, and what exactly they said. Quote them. As it is, this whole thing is moot because nowhere in your sources is it mentioned that there is discrepancy regarding WHY they held the meeting, only that they did. When you provide a quote that isn't attributed to yourself, or to someone who heard somebody's brother say something, then I will stop reverting. Please know, however, that I am not dreading you finding the quote - I look forward to it. Just don't bullsh*t. -- DarrenBaker 06:18, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
I don't think it's too much to ask that information pertaining to this incident be kept within this section, and that it be kept as objective as possible. Also, using terms such as "best known for" or "reputation as" is severely subjective and reflective of an expression of a personal point of view rather than being factual. Oystergumbo 07:35, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
The tone of this article is still very biased towards Bertuzzi (refered to as "Todd" in at least one sentence). For example, a laundry list of forgiveness is presented without a contrary list of people who do not forgive him (e.g. Moore who wanted the suspension to continue).
It is quite clear that instead of falling straight down after stepping on the stick (which slid out sideways, leading him to fall straight down, which would have led to him probably dragging Moore down by his jersey), he used his left arm to push the top half of Moore's body over. Bertuzzi admits to it. It couldn't be clearer, and any apologetic editing is really just that - apologising for a really bad decision. DarrenBaker 20:20, 28 November 2005 (UTC)
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Archive 1 |
someone should mention something about the incident in which he was suspended ten games for leaving the bench during a fight
I don't have a problem with you adding what you're adding, personally, because I really couldn't give to sh*ts about Bertuzzi or the 'Steve Moore Incident'. Hockey really doesn't interest me. I am removing your edits because you clearly do not grasp the concept of weasel words. When you use phrases like, "some people say" or "media outlets say", you're presenting hearsay information by way of weasel words. When you add the sentences, use phraseology that indicates WHO said WHAT, and what exactly they said. Quote them. As it is, this whole thing is moot because nowhere in your sources is it mentioned that there is discrepancy regarding WHY they held the meeting, only that they did. When you provide a quote that isn't attributed to yourself, or to someone who heard somebody's brother say something, then I will stop reverting. Please know, however, that I am not dreading you finding the quote - I look forward to it. Just don't bullsh*t. -- DarrenBaker 06:18, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
I don't think it's too much to ask that information pertaining to this incident be kept within this section, and that it be kept as objective as possible. Also, using terms such as "best known for" or "reputation as" is severely subjective and reflective of an expression of a personal point of view rather than being factual. Oystergumbo 07:35, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
The tone of this article is still very biased towards Bertuzzi (refered to as "Todd" in at least one sentence). For example, a laundry list of forgiveness is presented without a contrary list of people who do not forgive him (e.g. Moore who wanted the suspension to continue).
It is quite clear that instead of falling straight down after stepping on the stick (which slid out sideways, leading him to fall straight down, which would have led to him probably dragging Moore down by his jersey), he used his left arm to push the top half of Moore's body over. Bertuzzi admits to it. It couldn't be clearer, and any apologetic editing is really just that - apologising for a really bad decision. DarrenBaker 20:20, 28 November 2005 (UTC)