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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Lucky Shot/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 12:34, 28 May 2015 (UTC) reply


I'll read through this now and will finish this soon JAG UAR  12:34, 28 May 2015 (UTC) reply

Disambiguations: No links found.

Linkrot: No linkrot found.

Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    I would strongly recommend cutting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced
    I think the lead focuses too much on the plot and not enough is mentioned about the production/reception (whatever it covered on it anyway!)
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a ( major aspects): b ( focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

As before, this one meets the GA criteria so I'll promote it now. Well done JAG UAR  15:28, 29 May 2015 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Lucky Shot/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 12:34, 28 May 2015 (UTC) reply


I'll read through this now and will finish this soon JAG UAR  12:34, 28 May 2015 (UTC) reply

Disambiguations: No links found.

Linkrot: No linkrot found.

Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    I would strongly recommend cutting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced
    I think the lead focuses too much on the plot and not enough is mentioned about the production/reception (whatever it covered on it anyway!)
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a ( major aspects): b ( focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

As before, this one meets the GA criteria so I'll promote it now. Well done JAG UAR  15:28, 29 May 2015 (UTC) reply


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