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Plot rewrite

The Plot summary was way too long, way too detailed, and way too poorly written. I made it short and sweet, leaving out all the messy detail that takes two hours on screen. Nick Beeson ( talk) 02:30, 22 October 2014 (UTC) reply

That's an improvement, but it seems a bit short. WP:FILMPLOT recommends between 400 and 700 words. This is about 215 words. NinjaRobotPirate ( talk) 04:04, 22 October 2014 (UTC) reply
@ Nwbeeson: Work on the plot more to get it to 400 to 700 words and make it concrete as possible. BattleshipMan ( talk) 16:21, 26 October 2014 (UTC) reply

Congratulations. This would be one of the most coherent and cogent film reviews I have read on Wiki. Also extremely well written. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.155.98.241 ( talk) 10:28, 5 December 2016 (UTC) reply

Jack Nicholson

The article interprets several sources to mean Jack Nicholson "turned down" the role, but the director explains it quite differently [1] saying that they would have loved to have Nicholson but he wanted further rewrites and they didn't want to risk delaying the project. Accordingly the production section could do with a rewrite to avoid the oversimplification that Nicholson "turned down" the role. -- 109.76.153.229 ( talk) 09:37, 23 June 2020 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Plot rewrite

The Plot summary was way too long, way too detailed, and way too poorly written. I made it short and sweet, leaving out all the messy detail that takes two hours on screen. Nick Beeson ( talk) 02:30, 22 October 2014 (UTC) reply

That's an improvement, but it seems a bit short. WP:FILMPLOT recommends between 400 and 700 words. This is about 215 words. NinjaRobotPirate ( talk) 04:04, 22 October 2014 (UTC) reply
@ Nwbeeson: Work on the plot more to get it to 400 to 700 words and make it concrete as possible. BattleshipMan ( talk) 16:21, 26 October 2014 (UTC) reply

Congratulations. This would be one of the most coherent and cogent film reviews I have read on Wiki. Also extremely well written. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.155.98.241 ( talk) 10:28, 5 December 2016 (UTC) reply

Jack Nicholson

The article interprets several sources to mean Jack Nicholson "turned down" the role, but the director explains it quite differently [1] saying that they would have loved to have Nicholson but he wanted further rewrites and they didn't want to risk delaying the project. Accordingly the production section could do with a rewrite to avoid the oversimplification that Nicholson "turned down" the role. -- 109.76.153.229 ( talk) 09:37, 23 June 2020 (UTC) reply


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