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Are so many external links really necessary?? Only official links are needed to be there. ASHU IND 12:00, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
hey someone just elaborated the plot. it was good to read and i can imagine the whole movie now. thanks to the editor but i think it needs a review and some corrections. -- Msrag ( talk) 11:02, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
This film is about the life of a prostitute. The fate of promiscuous women is unpleasant in the end.- 59.95.13.131 ( talk) 11:18, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
Vidya also made an apperance on Kaun Banega Crorepati on November 10, 2011 episode to promote the film. She won Rs 640,000 which she said will be donated to a charity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Saneguy ( talk • contribs) 08:59, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
I see that someone has removed Nylon Nalini and retained Disco Shanti in reference to the theme. What do they mean by that Nylon Nalini was not a real person but Disco Shanti was? These are both screen names of women who played out their roles and characters. None of these names were of "real persons"; Silk's wasn't either. There was also Polyester Padmini. The reference that has been tagged with this statement clearly has director Milan Luthria mentioning the name of Nylon Nalini as one of Silk's contemporaries who inspired the film. 120.62.20.87 ( talk) 08:13, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
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While Vidya Balan definitely knew that she had to go extra glam to play Silk Smitha in Milan Luthria's Dirty Picture produced by Ekta Kapoor, Balan sort of freaked out when she saw the sketches of what she needs to wear for the portrayal.
Hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya is so fond of) got a bit too hot to handle for the lady. Also, she would have to wear these outrageous outfits after she gains some extra kilos on her thighs and other areas that the role requires, which left the actress gob smacked.
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When Vidya Balan was narrated the script and shown sketches of what she needed to wear for the portrayal, she completely freaked out. Hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya is so fond of) got a bit too hot to handle for her. Also, she would have to wear these outrageous outfits gaining some extra kilos on her thighs and other areas which left the actress gob smacked.
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I've removed some lingering close paraphrasing of that source and will look at some of the other material to see if it also follows too closely. -- Moonriddengirl (talk) 19:23, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
When Vidya Balan was narrated the script and shown sketches of what she needed to wear for the portrayal, including hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya so often wears), she was uncomfortable. Kapoor has repeatedly stated in the media that Vidya was perfect to portray the complex character of Smitha. She added, "She has such a range of acting... her expressions are well controlled... We couldn't have found anyone better than Vidya for this role. It's a casting that very few would think is viable because it is going to be nothing like Vidya has done before. But I am confident she will push the envelope as far as she can".
When Vidya Balan was narrated the script and shown sketches of what she needed to wear for the portrayal, she completely freaked out. Hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya is so fond of) got a bit too hot to handle for her.
When Vidya Balan was narrated the script and shown sketches of what she needed to wear for the portrayal, including hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya so often wears), she was uncomfortable.
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(This article has some very strange wording in it. Is it a translation or something? I have copy edited some of it but I'm unsure if I am interpreting the meaning correctly.)
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Made the above changes. Smarojit ( talk) 04:35, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the changes. The wording is still a little odd in places but I attribute that to cultural differences. MathewTownsend ( talk) 17:18, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
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Are so many external links really necessary?? Only official links are needed to be there. ASHU IND 12:00, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
hey someone just elaborated the plot. it was good to read and i can imagine the whole movie now. thanks to the editor but i think it needs a review and some corrections. -- Msrag ( talk) 11:02, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
This film is about the life of a prostitute. The fate of promiscuous women is unpleasant in the end.- 59.95.13.131 ( talk) 11:18, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
Vidya also made an apperance on Kaun Banega Crorepati on November 10, 2011 episode to promote the film. She won Rs 640,000 which she said will be donated to a charity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Saneguy ( talk • contribs) 08:59, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
I see that someone has removed Nylon Nalini and retained Disco Shanti in reference to the theme. What do they mean by that Nylon Nalini was not a real person but Disco Shanti was? These are both screen names of women who played out their roles and characters. None of these names were of "real persons"; Silk's wasn't either. There was also Polyester Padmini. The reference that has been tagged with this statement clearly has director Milan Luthria mentioning the name of Nylon Nalini as one of Silk's contemporaries who inspired the film. 120.62.20.87 ( talk) 08:13, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
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There are no copyright issues with this article. I have nominated the article for a GA Review again. Please do not withdraw it without appropriate reasons. smaro! 05:41, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
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While Vidya Balan definitely knew that she had to go extra glam to play Silk Smitha in Milan Luthria's Dirty Picture produced by Ekta Kapoor, Balan sort of freaked out when she saw the sketches of what she needs to wear for the portrayal.
Hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya is so fond of) got a bit too hot to handle for the lady. Also, she would have to wear these outrageous outfits after she gains some extra kilos on her thighs and other areas that the role requires, which left the actress gob smacked.
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When Vidya Balan was narrated the script and shown sketches of what she needed to wear for the portrayal, she completely freaked out. Hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya is so fond of) got a bit too hot to handle for her. Also, she would have to wear these outrageous outfits gaining some extra kilos on her thighs and other areas which left the actress gob smacked.
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I've removed some lingering close paraphrasing of that source and will look at some of the other material to see if it also follows too closely. -- Moonriddengirl (talk) 19:23, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
When Vidya Balan was narrated the script and shown sketches of what she needed to wear for the portrayal, including hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya so often wears), she was uncomfortable. Kapoor has repeatedly stated in the media that Vidya was perfect to portray the complex character of Smitha. She added, "She has such a range of acting... her expressions are well controlled... We couldn't have found anyone better than Vidya for this role. It's a casting that very few would think is viable because it is going to be nothing like Vidya has done before. But I am confident she will push the envelope as far as she can".
When Vidya Balan was narrated the script and shown sketches of what she needed to wear for the portrayal, she completely freaked out. Hot pants, low necks and petticoats (without the saree that Vidya is so fond of) got a bit too hot to handle for her.
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Made the above changes. Smarojit ( talk) 04:35, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the changes. The wording is still a little odd in places but I attribute that to cultural differences. MathewTownsend ( talk) 17:18, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
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