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Reviewer: SirDot ( talk · contribs) 19:47, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
In order to review an article, you need to either not be an editor who had substantially contributed to it, or didn't nominate it. XTools says I edited 0.1% of the article, which is not subsantial. So technically I think I should be able to review this GAN. Putting on hold for a month. — SirDot ( talk) 19:47, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
based on the Marvel Comics supervillain of the same name" → Delink "supervillain" from Thanos
His primary goal is to obtain the six Infinity Stones, cosmic gems with the power to stabilize the universe's overpopulation and prevent what he views as its inevitable demise.If so I think it's fine how it is.
With the help of his adopted children" → Don't think the "Children of Thanos" are explicitly described as his adopted children but this is fine
and after a significant conflict against various entities including the Avengers, the Guardians of the Galaxy, and their allies," → and after the Infinity War primarily against the Avengers and the Guardians of the Galaxy,
Thanos is successful in assembling the Stones within his Infinity Gauntlet and erasing half of all life in the universe." → Thanos is successful in committing the Blip, which disintegrates half of all life in the universe. (Stones within Gauntlet part can stay)
He then destroys the Stones to prevent his victory from being undone and retires, only to be ambushed by the Avengers and killed by Thor." → He then atomizes the Stones and retires, but is eventually killed by Thor.
In 2023, the Avengers utilize time travel to obtain past versions of the Stones and undo Thanos' actions." Reword a bit
Thanos is a central figure in the MCU's " Infinity Saga", having appeared in five films, most notably in Avengers: Infinity War (2018) and Avengers: Endgame (2019). Several versions of Thanos from within the MCU multiverse also appear in Endgame, the Disney+ animated series What If...? (2021–present), and the Phase Four film Doctor Strange in the Multiverse of Madness (2022)." — SirDot ( talk) 20:16, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
The character has been well-received by critics and fans alike. Thanos is often credited as one of the MCU's best villains, as well as one of the greatest film villains of all-time."
Hello @ ZooBlazer and SirDot:, where does this nomination currently stand? Is there further review needed, and have concerns been addressed? CMD ( talk) 01:31, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: SirDot ( talk · contribs) 19:47, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
In order to review an article, you need to either not be an editor who had substantially contributed to it, or didn't nominate it. XTools says I edited 0.1% of the article, which is not subsantial. So technically I think I should be able to review this GAN. Putting on hold for a month. — SirDot ( talk) 19:47, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
based on the Marvel Comics supervillain of the same name" → Delink "supervillain" from Thanos
His primary goal is to obtain the six Infinity Stones, cosmic gems with the power to stabilize the universe's overpopulation and prevent what he views as its inevitable demise.If so I think it's fine how it is.
With the help of his adopted children" → Don't think the "Children of Thanos" are explicitly described as his adopted children but this is fine
and after a significant conflict against various entities including the Avengers, the Guardians of the Galaxy, and their allies," → and after the Infinity War primarily against the Avengers and the Guardians of the Galaxy,
Thanos is successful in assembling the Stones within his Infinity Gauntlet and erasing half of all life in the universe." → Thanos is successful in committing the Blip, which disintegrates half of all life in the universe. (Stones within Gauntlet part can stay)
He then destroys the Stones to prevent his victory from being undone and retires, only to be ambushed by the Avengers and killed by Thor." → He then atomizes the Stones and retires, but is eventually killed by Thor.
In 2023, the Avengers utilize time travel to obtain past versions of the Stones and undo Thanos' actions." Reword a bit
Thanos is a central figure in the MCU's " Infinity Saga", having appeared in five films, most notably in Avengers: Infinity War (2018) and Avengers: Endgame (2019). Several versions of Thanos from within the MCU multiverse also appear in Endgame, the Disney+ animated series What If...? (2021–present), and the Phase Four film Doctor Strange in the Multiverse of Madness (2022)." — SirDot ( talk) 20:16, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
The character has been well-received by critics and fans alike. Thanos is often credited as one of the MCU's best villains, as well as one of the greatest film villains of all-time."
Hello @ ZooBlazer and SirDot:, where does this nomination currently stand? Is there further review needed, and have concerns been addressed? CMD ( talk) 01:31, 22 October 2022 (UTC)