Consolidate the 3 paragraphs in the lede. They all relate to the aircraft. Y Done. AM
The gunner with a Lewis gun was enclosed above the third wing. Awkward, rephrase. Y Done. AM
Link written off. Y Done. AM
By authorities I presume that you mean the RNAS? Y Done. AM
The 75 mph speed of the Nighthawk vs. the 60 mph speed of the Zeppelin doesn't seem to imply that the former was outclassed. More context is needed here.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 08:21, 19 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Not sure what's going on here, as hardly any German airships built ever reached a speed of 70mph.[1] I'll investigate further.
Amitchell125 (
talk) 09:28, 19 February 2024 (UTC)reply
I can only imagine the underpowering is referring to aircraft's slow rate of climb (10,000 feet in an hour) rather than the speed of 70mph.
Amitchell125 (
talk) 17:17, 22 February 2024 (UTC)reply
That's what I was thinking as well, but unless you have a source that explicitly says as much... Barring that I'd suggest rephrasing so that the speed differential doesn't seem to be the cause of it's suckitude.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 17:47, 22 February 2024 (UTC) Y Done. AMreply
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Sturmvogel 66: Any more comments to come? The above have been addressed, I think.
Amitchell125 (
talk) 18:24, 26 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Sorry, I didn't see that you'd addressed the problem after my comment.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 18:56, 26 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Consolidate the 3 paragraphs in the lede. They all relate to the aircraft. Y Done. AM
The gunner with a Lewis gun was enclosed above the third wing. Awkward, rephrase. Y Done. AM
Link written off. Y Done. AM
By authorities I presume that you mean the RNAS? Y Done. AM
The 75 mph speed of the Nighthawk vs. the 60 mph speed of the Zeppelin doesn't seem to imply that the former was outclassed. More context is needed here.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 08:21, 19 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Not sure what's going on here, as hardly any German airships built ever reached a speed of 70mph.[1] I'll investigate further.
Amitchell125 (
talk) 09:28, 19 February 2024 (UTC)reply
I can only imagine the underpowering is referring to aircraft's slow rate of climb (10,000 feet in an hour) rather than the speed of 70mph.
Amitchell125 (
talk) 17:17, 22 February 2024 (UTC)reply
That's what I was thinking as well, but unless you have a source that explicitly says as much... Barring that I'd suggest rephrasing so that the speed differential doesn't seem to be the cause of it's suckitude.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 17:47, 22 February 2024 (UTC) Y Done. AMreply
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Sturmvogel 66: Any more comments to come? The above have been addressed, I think.
Amitchell125 (
talk) 18:24, 26 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Sorry, I didn't see that you'd addressed the problem after my comment.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 18:56, 26 February 2024 (UTC)reply