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A very interesting topic, but I am confused by some of the language used. For example is it the response of the harsh critic, or is it that the harsh critic responds to provocation? I think this could be written in a clearer manner:
Also - why a harsh critic? Does this have particular resonance within discussion of the topic, or is it merely a good example of the phenomenon?
In addition, I have problem with the following sentence, in which the quotation doesn't make sense in the context of the sentence containing it. Not negative surely? Negate might make more sense here, but may not in discussion of the topic.
Otherwise, keep up the good work! Major Bloodnok ( talk) 12:20, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
What does "a horizontal phenomenon ... in any vertically orientated stage of life" mean? — Tamfang ( talk) 17:18, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
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A very interesting topic, but I am confused by some of the language used. For example is it the response of the harsh critic, or is it that the harsh critic responds to provocation? I think this could be written in a clearer manner:
Also - why a harsh critic? Does this have particular resonance within discussion of the topic, or is it merely a good example of the phenomenon?
In addition, I have problem with the following sentence, in which the quotation doesn't make sense in the context of the sentence containing it. Not negative surely? Negate might make more sense here, but may not in discussion of the topic.
Otherwise, keep up the good work! Major Bloodnok ( talk) 12:20, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
What does "a horizontal phenomenon ... in any vertically orientated stage of life" mean? — Tamfang ( talk) 17:18, 26 June 2008 (UTC)