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Reviewer: Esprit15d • talk • contribs 19:33, 22 July 2010 (UTC)
Overall, an outstanding article. Somehow I missed this episode (I thought I had seen all the fall eps--anyhoo). The grammar is strong, the images look good, the phrasing is neutral, it is very thorough. It was really a pleasure to read. Some issues:
Production
"This plot was first introduced in the fourth season premiere episode "Season 4", in which Jack explains that the show's staff have become too elitist and need to change to survive in tough economic times,[14] and informs Liz to begin searching for a new cast member to help lessen this elitist image." - runon sentence
Cultural references
"Star Wars is frequently referenced in 30 Rock, beginning with the pilot episode in 2006 where Tracy is seen shouting that he is a Jedi.[21] Liz admits to being a huge fan of Star Wars, saying that she had watched it many times with Pete Hornberger (Scott Adsit),[22] and dressed up as the Star Wars character Princess Leia during four recent Halloweens,[23] and while trying to get out of jury duty in Chicago and New York.[24][25] Star Wars is also referenced when Tracy takes on the identity of the character Chewbacca.[26]"
does not belong in an episode-specific article. I would move this to the show's main page and then simply say, "References to Star Wars is a running gag on 30 Rock, and then pipe link running gag to the section that touched on this this on article's main page. I would also move, or remove "Fey, a fan of Star Wars herself, said that the weekly Star Wars joke or reference "started happening organically" when the crew realized that they had a Star Wars reference "in almost every show". Fey said that from then on "it became a thing where [they] tried to keep it going", and that even though they could not include one in every episode, they still had a "pretty high batting average". Fey attributed most of the references to Robert Carlock, whom she described as "the resident expert".[28]"
Reception
"The episode received generally mixed reception." → change to "The episode received generally mixed critical reception." and make it the first sentence of the following paragraph.
I'm putting the article on hold, but if theses issues are addressed (especially the "Season 4" formatting issue, I will easily pass this.--Esprit15d • talk • contribs 19:33, 22 July 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Esprit15d • talk • contribs 19:33, 22 July 2010 (UTC)
Overall, an outstanding article. Somehow I missed this episode (I thought I had seen all the fall eps--anyhoo). The grammar is strong, the images look good, the phrasing is neutral, it is very thorough. It was really a pleasure to read. Some issues:
Production
"This plot was first introduced in the fourth season premiere episode "Season 4", in which Jack explains that the show's staff have become too elitist and need to change to survive in tough economic times,[14] and informs Liz to begin searching for a new cast member to help lessen this elitist image." - runon sentence
Cultural references
"Star Wars is frequently referenced in 30 Rock, beginning with the pilot episode in 2006 where Tracy is seen shouting that he is a Jedi.[21] Liz admits to being a huge fan of Star Wars, saying that she had watched it many times with Pete Hornberger (Scott Adsit),[22] and dressed up as the Star Wars character Princess Leia during four recent Halloweens,[23] and while trying to get out of jury duty in Chicago and New York.[24][25] Star Wars is also referenced when Tracy takes on the identity of the character Chewbacca.[26]"
does not belong in an episode-specific article. I would move this to the show's main page and then simply say, "References to Star Wars is a running gag on 30 Rock, and then pipe link running gag to the section that touched on this this on article's main page. I would also move, or remove "Fey, a fan of Star Wars herself, said that the weekly Star Wars joke or reference "started happening organically" when the crew realized that they had a Star Wars reference "in almost every show". Fey said that from then on "it became a thing where [they] tried to keep it going", and that even though they could not include one in every episode, they still had a "pretty high batting average". Fey attributed most of the references to Robert Carlock, whom she described as "the resident expert".[28]"
Reception
"The episode received generally mixed reception." → change to "The episode received generally mixed critical reception." and make it the first sentence of the following paragraph.
I'm putting the article on hold, but if theses issues are addressed (especially the "Season 4" formatting issue, I will easily pass this.--Esprit15d • talk • contribs 19:33, 22 July 2010 (UTC)
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