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The following changes have been made since the "looks like an advertisement" flag was added, specifically intended to remove point of view (npov violations):
-removed disambiguation throughout
-removed phrases like: many, notable, substantial, recognized widely, etc.
-The assertion that Spot Welders has been focused on a design centric environment has been removed, relying on the citation of specific designers and architects to make that case without point of view.
-The opening paragraph has been rewritten to follow NPOV standards.
-additional references citing awards and published collaborations have been added.
please view the revision differences between the advert tag version and current here: http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Spot_Welders&diff=217627037&oldid=216751323
I will solicit direct editor feedback on these revisions, with the intention of removing the advert tag.
please add feedback, Shamus00 ( talk) 03:32, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's
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The following changes have been made since the "looks like an advertisement" flag was added, specifically intended to remove point of view (npov violations):
-removed disambiguation throughout
-removed phrases like: many, notable, substantial, recognized widely, etc.
-The assertion that Spot Welders has been focused on a design centric environment has been removed, relying on the citation of specific designers and architects to make that case without point of view.
-The opening paragraph has been rewritten to follow NPOV standards.
-additional references citing awards and published collaborations have been added.
please view the revision differences between the advert tag version and current here: http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Spot_Welders&diff=217627037&oldid=216751323
I will solicit direct editor feedback on these revisions, with the intention of removing the advert tag.
please add feedback, Shamus00 ( talk) 03:32, 10 June 2008 (UTC)