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Reviewer: Bridies ( talk · contribs) 14:31, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
Starting review, comments shall follow in due course. bridies ( talk) 14:31, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
1. Prose is mostly good, and I'll likely do a minor copy edit once every thing else is done. Before that though, the lead has a couple of huge sentences that don't really work:
2. Mostly looks good. I will test-check some claims later. A couple of issues though:
3. Broad in its coverage. The reception section isn't greatly so, but about as best can be expected in this instance.
4. Mostly neutral, but there's the dubious claims of universal acclaim for some features (see above).
5. Article has the box art, the FUR for which is now just about adequate (suggest improving it further if at all possible: copyright holder/author, commercial related info, resolution explanation)
6. Stable
OK, I believe everything raised above is now fixed. I have also now copy edited the article, hopefully getting all the grammar issues, and the prose should be of at least GA standard. I shall pass this presently. bridies ( talk) 16:01, 16 September 2012 (UTC) Also, since some advice aimed at a prospective FAC was requested:
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section "Development": "...It was initially designed to run only on a P200 with 3dfx acceleration", what's this "p200" stand for? CPU Pentium MMX 200? I think this need to be clarify.-- Jarodalien ( talk) 14:29, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Bridies ( talk · contribs) 14:31, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
Starting review, comments shall follow in due course. bridies ( talk) 14:31, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
1. Prose is mostly good, and I'll likely do a minor copy edit once every thing else is done. Before that though, the lead has a couple of huge sentences that don't really work:
2. Mostly looks good. I will test-check some claims later. A couple of issues though:
3. Broad in its coverage. The reception section isn't greatly so, but about as best can be expected in this instance.
4. Mostly neutral, but there's the dubious claims of universal acclaim for some features (see above).
5. Article has the box art, the FUR for which is now just about adequate (suggest improving it further if at all possible: copyright holder/author, commercial related info, resolution explanation)
6. Stable
OK, I believe everything raised above is now fixed. I have also now copy edited the article, hopefully getting all the grammar issues, and the prose should be of at least GA standard. I shall pass this presently. bridies ( talk) 16:01, 16 September 2012 (UTC) Also, since some advice aimed at a prospective FAC was requested:
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section "Development": "...It was initially designed to run only on a P200 with 3dfx acceleration", what's this "p200" stand for? CPU Pentium MMX 200? I think this need to be clarify.-- Jarodalien ( talk) 14:29, 5 July 2020 (UTC)