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I recently made a long series of edits to this article, for which, though I provided edit summaries, I will now offer a more detailed explanation. First, the lede, which was poorly written and contained information unnecessary for the lede, including unreferenced information about home media. Then, I copy-edited the plot, including removal of the cast member's names, which is redundant. Then the cast itself, where I removed the table, which is unnecessary and has been removed from every film article I have ever worked on. In the production section, I removed the paragraph about Glenn enjoying working with Costner, which had nothing to do with the production. The amazon.com links are borderline. I argue that they communicate nothing and are virtually spam. If the point is to show release dates, there are surely other sources that can be used. --- RepublicanJacobite The'FortyFive' 01:11, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
Here are a couple of references that have chapters about Silverado that could be used for the article. If there are any visual elements, then a screenshot could be uploaded to illustrate the context.
In addition, there is this book that has a page about Silverado, which I have uploaded here. It may be worth including a screenshot of Kline and Glover together to illustrate the context. Erik ( talk | contribs) 16:13, 9 February 2011 (UTC)
I removed a passage from the "Critical response" section that referenced a Time Out review authored by someone named CPea. The author should be reliable, and I think a pseudonym like "CPea" is suspect. While CPea has written other reviews, there is no biographical information, and I'm concerned that the so-called critic may be an amateur with a nickname. Erik ( talk | contribs) 02:01, 10 February 2011 (UTC)
There is no reason to refer to Danny Glover as a "negro cowboy" unless the full story of the bar scene is told, which is unnecessary. Sheriff Langton tells him to leave town because he broke the law, not because he's black. Furthermore, use of the word "negro" is offensive and stupid. --- The Old Jacobite The '45 12:54, 30 April 2018 (UTC)
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I recently made a long series of edits to this article, for which, though I provided edit summaries, I will now offer a more detailed explanation. First, the lede, which was poorly written and contained information unnecessary for the lede, including unreferenced information about home media. Then, I copy-edited the plot, including removal of the cast member's names, which is redundant. Then the cast itself, where I removed the table, which is unnecessary and has been removed from every film article I have ever worked on. In the production section, I removed the paragraph about Glenn enjoying working with Costner, which had nothing to do with the production. The amazon.com links are borderline. I argue that they communicate nothing and are virtually spam. If the point is to show release dates, there are surely other sources that can be used. --- RepublicanJacobite The'FortyFive' 01:11, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
Here are a couple of references that have chapters about Silverado that could be used for the article. If there are any visual elements, then a screenshot could be uploaded to illustrate the context.
In addition, there is this book that has a page about Silverado, which I have uploaded here. It may be worth including a screenshot of Kline and Glover together to illustrate the context. Erik ( talk | contribs) 16:13, 9 February 2011 (UTC)
I removed a passage from the "Critical response" section that referenced a Time Out review authored by someone named CPea. The author should be reliable, and I think a pseudonym like "CPea" is suspect. While CPea has written other reviews, there is no biographical information, and I'm concerned that the so-called critic may be an amateur with a nickname. Erik ( talk | contribs) 02:01, 10 February 2011 (UTC)
There is no reason to refer to Danny Glover as a "negro cowboy" unless the full story of the bar scene is told, which is unnecessary. Sheriff Langton tells him to leave town because he broke the law, not because he's black. Furthermore, use of the word "negro" is offensive and stupid. --- The Old Jacobite The '45 12:54, 30 April 2018 (UTC)