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There is just too much lauding, quoting and crediting and almost entirely positive; little factual or historical information. Overall prose, somehow, feels like a press write up.
Just wanted to ask some senior people if the article is all right and is it me who is being harsh before editing the content.
There's a wrongly attributed quote in the last paragraph of the Choreography section
Pretty sure the quote attributed to John Travolta is simply a massive mis-read of the linked article. The author of the article is stating that she enjoyed the dancing and that she thinks Travolta did as well. — Preceding
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I have removed the entire paragraph. The source is way too ambiguous for anything that it said other than, perhaps, that Davar choreographed something at that particular event. -
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There is just too much lauding, quoting and crediting and almost entirely positive; little factual or historical information. Overall prose, somehow, feels like a press write up.
Just wanted to ask some senior people if the article is all right and is it me who is being harsh before editing the content.
There's a wrongly attributed quote in the last paragraph of the Choreography section
Pretty sure the quote attributed to John Travolta is simply a massive mis-read of the linked article. The author of the article is stating that she enjoyed the dancing and that she thinks Travolta did as well. — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
2602:306:B8F8:8900:2080:164F:CF2A:CDDC (
talk)
20:05, 31 March 2017 (UTC)reply
I have removed the entire paragraph. The source is way too ambiguous for anything that it said other than, perhaps, that Davar choreographed something at that particular event. -
Sitush (
talk)
10:28, 12 April 2018 (UTC)reply