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I want to make sure it is okay if remove the tag. This is a collection of facts about women who victims. The tag could take away from the public knowing of this. It is NPOV because it stating factual data on the crisis. Starlighsky ( talk) 03:20, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
@ Starlighsky: It may be a while before I can go over all these edits you've made, but one thing you need to fix is the formatting on the headers and sourcing you're adding. See the links editors have posted on your talk page that have guidelines and instructions about basic formatting, and look at the code for similar sections and text on the article page and use what is standard, like == marks to make headers, rather than bolding text, for instance, and don't put external links in headers or body text. External links should be formatted into inline cites per WP:CITE or moved to the External links section. Best, - CorbieVreccan ☊ ☼ 00:12, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
Off topic (sort of): Has anyone tried to, um, do something about WikiEd? I know I'm not the only one who dreads the arrival of the student projects, and the attempts to insert student papers into article space. I've never known any of them to stick around and become Wikipedians. - CorbieVreccan ☊ ☼ 21:07, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
This section seemed like a list of politically incorrect things related to native americans rather than victimization. I think the section should be removed and have WP:BOLDly done so. The entire section is approaching WP:COATRACK and WP:RIGHTGREATWRONGS. Toddst1 ( talk) 14:47, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 May 2023 and 21 July 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Efcordova ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Zeus Aurelius.
— Assignment last updated by SierraTL ( talk) 02:59, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
Moving the following from the article to talk for future use since we have extensive references/footnotes:
- The Facts on Violence Against Native American Women [3]
- "Canada: Stolen Sisters," Amnesty International of Canada. 4 Oct. 2004. Accessed 30 Oct. 2005, PDF.
- Davis, Angela Y. Violence against Women and the Ongoing Challenge to Racism. New York: Kitchen Table: Women of Color Press, 1985.
- Graef, Christine. "NCAI spearheads effort to stop violence against women." Indian Country Today. 29 Dec. 2003: A1.
- McDougall, Gay J. (1998). Contemporary forms of slavery: systematic rape, sexual slavery and slavery-like practices during armed conflict. Final report submitted by Ms. Jay J. McDougall, Special Rapporteur, E/CN.4/Sub.2/1998/13.
- Smith, Andrea. "Not an Indian Tradition: The Sexual Colonization of Native Peoples." Hypatia 2003: 73.
- United States, Department of Justice. "American Indians and Crime." 30 Oct. 2005 PDF.
- "Using Alternative Healing Ways," Mending the Sacred Hoop Technical Assistance Project 2004. Accessed 30 Oct. 2005, PDF.
- "Maze of Injustice, The failure to protect Indigenous women from sexual violence in the USA", Amnesty International. 2007
Toddst1 ( talk) 16:34, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
I've asked for clarification on which reports from the U.S. Department of Justice are referred to in the lede, but @ GreenMeansGo: has edit warred removing my tag. Since the whole sentence that contains this vague mention is only supported by a dead link, I've removed the entire sentence. If someone wants to add it back, please clarify which reports and support it with a valid reference. Thank you. Toddst1 ( talk) 19:07, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
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I want to make sure it is okay if remove the tag. This is a collection of facts about women who victims. The tag could take away from the public knowing of this. It is NPOV because it stating factual data on the crisis. Starlighsky ( talk) 03:20, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
@ Starlighsky: It may be a while before I can go over all these edits you've made, but one thing you need to fix is the formatting on the headers and sourcing you're adding. See the links editors have posted on your talk page that have guidelines and instructions about basic formatting, and look at the code for similar sections and text on the article page and use what is standard, like == marks to make headers, rather than bolding text, for instance, and don't put external links in headers or body text. External links should be formatted into inline cites per WP:CITE or moved to the External links section. Best, - CorbieVreccan ☊ ☼ 00:12, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
Off topic (sort of): Has anyone tried to, um, do something about WikiEd? I know I'm not the only one who dreads the arrival of the student projects, and the attempts to insert student papers into article space. I've never known any of them to stick around and become Wikipedians. - CorbieVreccan ☊ ☼ 21:07, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
This section seemed like a list of politically incorrect things related to native americans rather than victimization. I think the section should be removed and have WP:BOLDly done so. The entire section is approaching WP:COATRACK and WP:RIGHTGREATWRONGS. Toddst1 ( talk) 14:47, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 May 2023 and 21 July 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Efcordova ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Zeus Aurelius.
— Assignment last updated by SierraTL ( talk) 02:59, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
Moving the following from the article to talk for future use since we have extensive references/footnotes:
- The Facts on Violence Against Native American Women [3]
- "Canada: Stolen Sisters," Amnesty International of Canada. 4 Oct. 2004. Accessed 30 Oct. 2005, PDF.
- Davis, Angela Y. Violence against Women and the Ongoing Challenge to Racism. New York: Kitchen Table: Women of Color Press, 1985.
- Graef, Christine. "NCAI spearheads effort to stop violence against women." Indian Country Today. 29 Dec. 2003: A1.
- McDougall, Gay J. (1998). Contemporary forms of slavery: systematic rape, sexual slavery and slavery-like practices during armed conflict. Final report submitted by Ms. Jay J. McDougall, Special Rapporteur, E/CN.4/Sub.2/1998/13.
- Smith, Andrea. "Not an Indian Tradition: The Sexual Colonization of Native Peoples." Hypatia 2003: 73.
- United States, Department of Justice. "American Indians and Crime." 30 Oct. 2005 PDF.
- "Using Alternative Healing Ways," Mending the Sacred Hoop Technical Assistance Project 2004. Accessed 30 Oct. 2005, PDF.
- "Maze of Injustice, The failure to protect Indigenous women from sexual violence in the USA", Amnesty International. 2007
Toddst1 ( talk) 16:34, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
I've asked for clarification on which reports from the U.S. Department of Justice are referred to in the lede, but @ GreenMeansGo: has edit warred removing my tag. Since the whole sentence that contains this vague mention is only supported by a dead link, I've removed the entire sentence. If someone wants to add it back, please clarify which reports and support it with a valid reference. Thank you. Toddst1 ( talk) 19:07, 6 July 2023 (UTC)