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Very nice article. I have a comment. How can you say that critical reaction to the album was "mixed", and then follow with just one "for instance" that is entirely positive? I suggest you either add an example of a negative review, or change the descriptor to "positive" instead of "mixed". You could also write, instead of "For instance", "One positive review was the Allmusic's review..., which was ...."
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Very nice article. I have a comment. How can you say that critical reaction to the album was "mixed", and then follow with just one "for instance" that is entirely positive? I suggest you either add an example of a negative review, or change the descriptor to "positive" instead of "mixed". You could also write, instead of "For instance", "One positive review was the Allmusic's review..., which was ...."
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00:15, 15 December 2016 (UTC)reply