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*Per point 6b, clicking on the
suitable captions mentions that all images need alt text, per
WP:ALT Done —
Mike
Allen 01:11, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*The sentence He encounters several people with past connections to him as he comes closer to escaping the asylum and its inhabitants who have instructions contrary to his survival. is unclear and very difficult to read.
*player controls should not be wikilinked
*fictional does not need a wikilink
Done—
Mike
Allen 01:54, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*gives hints to Tapp as he progresses -- change hints to clues Done—
Mike
Allen 01:54, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*Change This caused Jigsaw to get someone to heal him to This caused Jigsaw to have him healed
*Considering that the game was far into production, the owners of the Saw brand, Lions Gate, was considering publishing the game themselves. - Change was considering to considered
*A
WP:GAMETRIVIA section. Extras and bonuses are not notable in and of themselves. Consider removing the section entirely. Done—
Mike
Allen 02:05, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*Akin to the films, Saw has been the subject of much controversy, even prior to the game's release. Similar to the rest of the franchise, the game has also been classified as "Torture porn" by its critics. can simply be Akin to the films, Saw has been the subject of much controversy, often being classified as "Torture porn" by its critics. Done —
Mike
Allen 00:48, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
It all reads pretty well. It needs some copy edits and other minor fixes, but could pass GA with updates. I can give you a week, or more if you feel you need it. Just keep me posted.
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Teancum (
talk) 18:09, 6 January 2010 (UTC)
Passing GA -- Teancum ( talk) 05:22, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
I thought I'd let it be known a peer review has been started since it doesnt seem to be evident by the nested and collapsed vg template. It's at Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Saw (video game) if you want to help out. Ground Z3R0 002 23:50, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
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Saw (video game) article. This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject. |
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*Per point 6b, clicking on the
suitable captions mentions that all images need alt text, per
WP:ALT Done —
Mike
Allen 01:11, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*The sentence He encounters several people with past connections to him as he comes closer to escaping the asylum and its inhabitants who have instructions contrary to his survival. is unclear and very difficult to read.
*player controls should not be wikilinked
*fictional does not need a wikilink
Done—
Mike
Allen 01:54, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*gives hints to Tapp as he progresses -- change hints to clues Done—
Mike
Allen 01:54, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*Change This caused Jigsaw to get someone to heal him to This caused Jigsaw to have him healed
*Considering that the game was far into production, the owners of the Saw brand, Lions Gate, was considering publishing the game themselves. - Change was considering to considered
*A
WP:GAMETRIVIA section. Extras and bonuses are not notable in and of themselves. Consider removing the section entirely. Done—
Mike
Allen 02:05, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
*Akin to the films, Saw has been the subject of much controversy, even prior to the game's release. Similar to the rest of the franchise, the game has also been classified as "Torture porn" by its critics. can simply be Akin to the films, Saw has been the subject of much controversy, often being classified as "Torture porn" by its critics. Done —
Mike
Allen 00:48, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
It all reads pretty well. It needs some copy edits and other minor fixes, but could pass GA with updates. I can give you a week, or more if you feel you need it. Just keep me posted.
Reviewer:
Teancum (
talk) 18:09, 6 January 2010 (UTC)
Passing GA -- Teancum ( talk) 05:22, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
I thought I'd let it be known a peer review has been started since it doesnt seem to be evident by the nested and collapsed vg template. It's at Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Saw (video game) if you want to help out. Ground Z3R0 002 23:50, 12 January 2010 (UTC)