This article is difficult to read--the language is terrible, sources are not cited, and the claims are largely unverifiable. It needs a complete rewrite with attention to getting the language corrected and clear for the reader.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.178.101.32 ( talk • contribs) 07:42, 13 July 2006
- Agreed: this needs work. Unfortunately, I am not familiar with the event; nor does the article provide enough context for me to even make minor fixes here and there. -- Thisisbossi 03:46, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
Made into redirect. `' mikka 22:45, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
This article is difficult to read--the language is terrible, sources are not cited, and the claims are largely unverifiable. It needs a complete rewrite with attention to getting the language corrected and clear for the reader.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.178.101.32 ( talk • contribs) 07:42, 13 July 2006
- Agreed: this needs work. Unfortunately, I am not familiar with the event; nor does the article provide enough context for me to even make minor fixes here and there. -- Thisisbossi 03:46, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
Made into redirect. `' mikka 22:45, 9 February 2007 (UTC)