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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 01:18, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
I will start this review tomorrow. MathewTownsend ( talk) 01:18, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
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MathewTownsend ( talk) 00:16, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:47, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
If now, we have become corrupt, lazy, love instant things, bureaucratic, have no sportsmanship, have no outstanding achievement in sports, should we blame President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono and Vice President Jusuf Kalla?
MathewTownsend ( talk) 20:28, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
MathewTownsend ( talk) 00:05, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
I think the lede needs proofing, and perhaps some rewording. There are some typos or something. MathewTownsend ( talk) 02:20, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
To meet GA criteria 1(b), which relates to specific manual of style guidelines, the article needs to comply with the advice in WP:LEAD. That is, in addition to being an introduction, the lead needs to be an adequate overview of the whole of the article. As a rough guide, each major section in the article should be represented with an appropriate summary in the lead. Also, the article should provide further details on all the things mentioned in the lead. And, the first few sentences should mention the most notable features of the article's subject - the essential facts that every reader should know.
I don't think the first few sentences mention the most notable features of the article's subject. I don't think the lead summarizes the article.
Everything else seems fine now.
MathewTownsend ( talk) 00:03, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
MathewTownsend ( talk) 17:48, 26 December 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 01:18, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
I will start this review tomorrow. MathewTownsend ( talk) 01:18, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
MathewTownsend ( talk) 00:16, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:47, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
If now, we have become corrupt, lazy, love instant things, bureaucratic, have no sportsmanship, have no outstanding achievement in sports, should we blame President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono and Vice President Jusuf Kalla?
MathewTownsend ( talk) 20:28, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
MathewTownsend ( talk) 00:05, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
I think the lede needs proofing, and perhaps some rewording. There are some typos or something. MathewTownsend ( talk) 02:20, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
To meet GA criteria 1(b), which relates to specific manual of style guidelines, the article needs to comply with the advice in WP:LEAD. That is, in addition to being an introduction, the lead needs to be an adequate overview of the whole of the article. As a rough guide, each major section in the article should be represented with an appropriate summary in the lead. Also, the article should provide further details on all the things mentioned in the lead. And, the first few sentences should mention the most notable features of the article's subject - the essential facts that every reader should know.
I don't think the first few sentences mention the most notable features of the article's subject. I don't think the lead summarizes the article.
Everything else seems fine now.
MathewTownsend ( talk) 00:03, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
MathewTownsend ( talk) 17:48, 26 December 2011 (UTC)
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