The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that US TV series Parks and Recreation season finale "Rock Show" received positive reviews but the lowest ratings of the season, with only 4.25 million households tuning in?
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This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Plot, this sentence ---> "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", there's something missing there. In the Reception section, "The A.V. Club writer Keith Phipps, who had been unsure about the Parks and Recreation throughout the season", this sentence reads very odd.
In the Production section, this is me, but you might want to add "http" to the website. In the Cultural references section, the hyphens needs to be
dashes. In the Reception section, italicize "The A.V. Club".
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
I think I've addressed most of your concerns here. I dropped the dashes altogether (somebody else made them into a list that didn't really work) and simply changed it to a sentence with commas, let me know if that works for you. I am at work so I can't drop the resolution on the photo from here, but I can easily do that when I get home. Regarding the sentence, "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", can you give me some feedback as to what you want me to do with it? I think it seems pretty clear right now; the guy is the only one without a date at the concern, so he's bummed out. If you can tell me what's unclear I will change it. Thanks for the review! — HunterKahn(
c) 18:28, 17 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Its fine regarding the Cultural references section. Well, do the resolution thing, cause I don't want to get in trouble with the article getting delisted, cause it'll hurt you, than it would me. Okay, the sentence "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", its missing "he" between "because" and "is", cause if you don't have that there, the sentence just reads awkwardly. That's just me. --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 19:05, 17 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Nope, you were totally right, I was just missing it. Fixed that, and the photo. Thanks! — HunterKahn(
c) 02:12, 18 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Okay, cause I was feeling dumb during all this. But, I'm glad you agree. :) Overall, everything checks out. Thank you to Hunter K. for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 14:28, 18 June 2009 (UTC)reply
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that US TV series Parks and Recreation season finale "Rock Show" received positive reviews but the lowest ratings of the season, with only 4.25 million households tuning in?
Current status: Good article
This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following
WikiProjects:
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Television, a collaborative effort to develop and improve Wikipedia articles about
television programs. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page where you can
join the discussion.
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comedy on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Plot, this sentence ---> "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", there's something missing there. In the Reception section, "The A.V. Club writer Keith Phipps, who had been unsure about the Parks and Recreation throughout the season", this sentence reads very odd.
In the Production section, this is me, but you might want to add "http" to the website. In the Cultural references section, the hyphens needs to be
dashes. In the Reception section, italicize "The A.V. Club".
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
I think I've addressed most of your concerns here. I dropped the dashes altogether (somebody else made them into a list that didn't really work) and simply changed it to a sentence with commas, let me know if that works for you. I am at work so I can't drop the resolution on the photo from here, but I can easily do that when I get home. Regarding the sentence, "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", can you give me some feedback as to what you want me to do with it? I think it seems pretty clear right now; the guy is the only one without a date at the concern, so he's bummed out. If you can tell me what's unclear I will change it. Thanks for the review! — HunterKahn(
c) 18:28, 17 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Its fine regarding the Cultural references section. Well, do the resolution thing, cause I don't want to get in trouble with the article getting delisted, cause it'll hurt you, than it would me. Okay, the sentence "Mark (Paul Schneider) feels lonely because is the only one at the concert without a date", its missing "he" between "because" and "is", cause if you don't have that there, the sentence just reads awkwardly. That's just me. --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 19:05, 17 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Nope, you were totally right, I was just missing it. Fixed that, and the photo. Thanks! — HunterKahn(
c) 02:12, 18 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Okay, cause I was feeling dumb during all this. But, I'm glad you agree. :) Overall, everything checks out. Thank you to Hunter K. for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 14:28, 18 June 2009 (UTC)reply