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This is really nice work
Indy beetle. You handled the conflicting and incomplete sources well. It's an important article in an area where Wikipedia's coverage could stand to be a lot better. My only suggestion would be this sentence: His father died when he was two years old, and one of his siblings also died. It just feels too dry - maybe something like "and one of his siblings died before adulthood". But that's far too minor an issue to stop promotion.
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Guettarda: Thank you for the review. I have implemented the recommended change. -
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This is really nice work
Indy beetle. You handled the conflicting and incomplete sources well. It's an important article in an area where Wikipedia's coverage could stand to be a lot better. My only suggestion would be this sentence: His father died when he was two years old, and one of his siblings also died. It just feels too dry - maybe something like "and one of his siblings died before adulthood". But that's far too minor an issue to stop promotion.
Guettarda (
talk) 15:40, 23 March 2019 (UTC)reply
@
Guettarda: Thank you for the review. I have implemented the recommended change. -
Indy beetle (
talk) 19:52, 23 March 2019 (UTC)reply