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Encyclopedic tone

Per the editorial comment about encyclopedic tone, I have made some edits to improve the text. I invite others to further edit to improve the article, and if someone feels that the 'encyclopedic tone' box can be removed (as the original writer I feel it is not apropos for me), that would be great. I try to avoid 'puffery' and such, but a re-read shows that I was a bit guilty. Regards Bill McKenna ( talk) 16:42, 6 May 2017 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Encyclopedic tone

Per the editorial comment about encyclopedic tone, I have made some edits to improve the text. I invite others to further edit to improve the article, and if someone feels that the 'encyclopedic tone' box can be removed (as the original writer I feel it is not apropos for me), that would be great. I try to avoid 'puffery' and such, but a re-read shows that I was a bit guilty. Regards Bill McKenna ( talk) 16:42, 6 May 2017 (UTC) reply


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