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As an article on quality assurance, this article should be a lot better. There are quite a few clumsy sentences here, for example, in the first lines "When the first specialized craftsmen arose manufacturing tools for others..." which is not a proper English sentence. Beyond this, there should be a more systematic, detailed and well cited historical overview. At the moment it is a bit shabby. So perhaps here would be a good place to start practicing quality assurance. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.24.113.27 ( talk) 12:22, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
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As an article on quality assurance, this article should be a lot better. There are quite a few clumsy sentences here, for example, in the first lines "When the first specialized craftsmen arose manufacturing tools for others..." which is not a proper English sentence. Beyond this, there should be a more systematic, detailed and well cited historical overview. At the moment it is a bit shabby. So perhaps here would be a good place to start practicing quality assurance. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.24.113.27 ( talk) 12:22, 25 August 2008 (UTC)