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Reviewer: Rjjiii ( talk · contribs) 09:26, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
I can't pass the article as written. (This is my first Good Article review. Let me know if you have any questions, issues, etc.)
The issues that I found with the article were regarding criteria 1, 2, and 3. The article is stable and contains valuable images. The lead has some slight NPOV issues, but I think that if rewritten for clarity, they'll be resolved.
For point 1 (Well-written), I think the lead is confusing due to some parts being out of order or mixed up. Several of the headings should likely be re-titled to give clearer indications of their contents. The final 2 paragraphs of the GoDaddy boycott are not clear.
For point 2 (Accuracy), the article is actually full of great sources and it seems to be accurate. I have 2 main issues with the sources. Many sources have dead links. These would benefit from an archive link if possible or a replacement. There are also several sources that appear to violate WP:SELFPUB. With the quantity of great 2nd party sources, these can likely be replaced.
For point 3 (Thorough), the article has 3 sections that are very small. These should likely be expanded or incorporated into another section. The article also lacks a clear layman's explanation of the bill's perceived danger. Finally, there are a handful of times something is mentioned but little further information is given including Bill Keller, Fight for the Future, the NYT opinion, and Google Bombs.
1. Well Written
2. Accuracy
2.1 References
2.2 Bibliography
2.2 External Links
http://s3.amazonaws.com/propublica/assets/images/sopa-opera-count.png This infographic is great. Is it an external link because the image in non-free? The information conveyed could be packed into a free image that would benefit more readers.
3. Thorough
4. NPOV
5. Stable
6. Images
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Reviewer: Rjjiii ( talk · contribs) 09:26, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
I can't pass the article as written. (This is my first Good Article review. Let me know if you have any questions, issues, etc.)
The issues that I found with the article were regarding criteria 1, 2, and 3. The article is stable and contains valuable images. The lead has some slight NPOV issues, but I think that if rewritten for clarity, they'll be resolved.
For point 1 (Well-written), I think the lead is confusing due to some parts being out of order or mixed up. Several of the headings should likely be re-titled to give clearer indications of their contents. The final 2 paragraphs of the GoDaddy boycott are not clear.
For point 2 (Accuracy), the article is actually full of great sources and it seems to be accurate. I have 2 main issues with the sources. Many sources have dead links. These would benefit from an archive link if possible or a replacement. There are also several sources that appear to violate WP:SELFPUB. With the quantity of great 2nd party sources, these can likely be replaced.
For point 3 (Thorough), the article has 3 sections that are very small. These should likely be expanded or incorporated into another section. The article also lacks a clear layman's explanation of the bill's perceived danger. Finally, there are a handful of times something is mentioned but little further information is given including Bill Keller, Fight for the Future, the NYT opinion, and Google Bombs.
1. Well Written
2. Accuracy
2.1 References
2.2 Bibliography
2.2 External Links
http://s3.amazonaws.com/propublica/assets/images/sopa-opera-count.png This infographic is great. Is it an external link because the image in non-free? The information conveyed could be packed into a free image that would benefit more readers.
3. Thorough
4. NPOV
5. Stable
6. Images