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"Popplio was met with a strong negative reception upon its debut, though it has retrospectively been viewed in a better light due to its evolutions." maybe split this to second paragraph and try to expand it if you can.
"Brionne is stated to be a highly positive Pok茅mon," remove comma
"Primarina has a unique "Z-Move"- a one time use powerful attack- named "Oceanic Operetta" I'm not sure what are these dashes thou?
"They are not obtainable in the base version of the games Pok茅mon Sword and Shield or Pok茅mon Scarlet and Violet" Add "like" before pokemon sword
remove "respectively".
put comma after pokemon go
"She further stated that "I disliked him. He didn鈥檛 seem as cool or as cute as Rowlet or Litten, and there was just something about his doofy face that made it easy to hate him." Was that from Kotaku's Patricia Hernandez? cite it in the end of sentence
ref 25 has apparently a name "published,"? remove it
ref 30 doesn't have date of the article, add it.
"with writer Christian Hoffer" add polygon
"The reactions to Popplio became so intensive that they led to the creature becoming an internet meme." maybe place this at the second sentence of the paragraph. My best bet is to place it before the Vice sentence.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
"Popplio was met with a strong negative reception upon its debut, though it has retrospectively been viewed in a better light due to its evolutions." maybe split this to second paragraph and try to expand it if you can.
"Brionne is stated to be a highly positive Pok茅mon," remove comma
"Primarina has a unique "Z-Move"- a one time use powerful attack- named "Oceanic Operetta" I'm not sure what are these dashes thou?
"They are not obtainable in the base version of the games Pok茅mon Sword and Shield or Pok茅mon Scarlet and Violet" Add "like" before pokemon sword
remove "respectively".
put comma after pokemon go
"She further stated that "I disliked him. He didn鈥檛 seem as cool or as cute as Rowlet or Litten, and there was just something about his doofy face that made it easy to hate him." Was that from Kotaku's Patricia Hernandez? cite it in the end of sentence
ref 25 has apparently a name "published,"? remove it
ref 30 doesn't have date of the article, add it.
"with writer Christian Hoffer" add polygon
"The reactions to Popplio became so intensive that they led to the creature becoming an internet meme." maybe place this at the second sentence of the paragraph. My best bet is to place it before the Vice sentence.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.