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Nominator: Simongraham ( talk · contribs) 12:55, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Wolverine XI ( talk · contribs) 10:20, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
I should finish the review today. Wolverine XI ( talk to me) 10:21, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
I'll stop here. What is apparent is that the article needs to be rewritten. The grammar and prose is particularly subpar. I suggest working on the article prose before renominating. Best, Wolverine XI ( talk to me) 13:10, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: Simongraham ( talk · contribs) 12:55, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Wolverine XI ( talk · contribs) 10:20, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
I should finish the review today. Wolverine XI ( talk to me) 10:21, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
I'll stop here. What is apparent is that the article needs to be rewritten. The grammar and prose is particularly subpar. I suggest working on the article prose before renominating. Best, Wolverine XI ( talk to me) 13:10, 11 June 2024 (UTC)