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In these edits I performed a major cleanup. I removed inappropriate boldface, attempted to bring clarity to grammar and conform the article to appropriate tone. I also added references. I got rid of the section on Baby Shaguila, because it didn't seem appropriate for inclusion, particularly as a unique section. A unique section might make more sense if she had died while filming or something. Maybe in a trivia section? I don't know. The stuff about here dying "unfortunately" is not appropriate tone for an encyclopedia. This isn't a graveyard, and we don't do somber memorial services for people. It's also unsourced, which is further problematic. That needs to be resolved before the content is added back. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 15:34, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
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In these edits I performed a major cleanup. I removed inappropriate boldface, attempted to bring clarity to grammar and conform the article to appropriate tone. I also added references. I got rid of the section on Baby Shaguila, because it didn't seem appropriate for inclusion, particularly as a unique section. A unique section might make more sense if she had died while filming or something. Maybe in a trivia section? I don't know. The stuff about here dying "unfortunately" is not appropriate tone for an encyclopedia. This isn't a graveyard, and we don't do somber memorial services for people. It's also unsourced, which is further problematic. That needs to be resolved before the content is added back. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 15:34, 21 October 2015 (UTC)