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I made sure to edit this article thoroughly as it had been written awfully before; there was a multitude of grammatical errors, such as extra commas and incorrect word use, strange sentence construction, incorrect spelling, and events and paragraphs chronologically out of order, which I have corrected for the convenience of the reader. It seems whoever wrote this article tried to write intellectually but tried too hard! Please, Wiki writers, be more careful! -- Divya da animal lvr ( talk) 20:48, 15 October 2008 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

concerning the grammar and vocabulary choices of this article

I made sure to edit this article thoroughly as it had been written awfully before; there was a multitude of grammatical errors, such as extra commas and incorrect word use, strange sentence construction, incorrect spelling, and events and paragraphs chronologically out of order, which I have corrected for the convenience of the reader. It seems whoever wrote this article tried to write intellectually but tried too hard! Please, Wiki writers, be more careful! -- Divya da animal lvr ( talk) 20:48, 15 October 2008 (UTC) reply


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