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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 17:13, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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Roach developed a reputation as one of the best "offensive minds" in the NFL and was hired as offensive coordinator by the Green Bay Packers in 1975, the first person ever to hold the position- I am guessing you mean he was he first OC the Packers ever had? If so, clarify that by adding "for the Packers" or something like that to the end.
Roach earned all-conference honors in football twice[a] while playing end and in the backfield and was team captain as a senior., if the sources differ on two or three, why not say that in the article? What made you choose "twice"?
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:53, 13 September 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 17:13, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
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Roach developed a reputation as one of the best "offensive minds" in the NFL and was hired as offensive coordinator by the Green Bay Packers in 1975, the first person ever to hold the position- I am guessing you mean he was he first OC the Packers ever had? If so, clarify that by adding "for the Packers" or something like that to the end.
Roach earned all-conference honors in football twice[a] while playing end and in the backfield and was team captain as a senior., if the sources differ on two or three, why not say that in the article? What made you choose "twice"?
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:53, 13 September 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Vaticidalprophet
talk
09:23, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 ( talk). Self-nominated at 17:26, 14 September 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Paul Roach; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook eligibility:
QPQ: Done. |
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BeanieFan11: Good article. Though i feel like the hook would be better if you mentioned that he didn't run for the election yet still got votes.
Onegreatjoke (
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18:11, 25 September 2023 (UTC)