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Sept 1, 2006 - This article needs some serious spelling/grammar checking.... 74.105.146.115 00:34, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
from VfD:
Tis an excerpt from
Parasite Eve. Redirect, no need to merge. --[[User:Valmi|Valmi
✒]] 03:11, 13 Oct 2004 (UTC)
end moved discussion
I just read through this and it looks like a twelve year-old wrote it. I'm not a great user of grammar either, but can someone PLEASE fix this? I read it and had almost no idea what was being said. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.154.212.92 ( talk • contribs) 22:00, September 9, 2006
I went ahead and rewrote the first 7 paragraphs - unfortunately I am writing from memory about a game I played many years ago, and with only the existing text to go on I can't be sure about the editing from this point on! Anyone else like to take on the rest? EyeSerene 18:38, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
I saw a sentance towards the end that says 'But the Army shows up with lots of guns, helicopters' etc. Asside from the obvious, if I am to remember correctly it was the Marines that show up, not the Army. I'll go give this an edit.
Maybe i`m overreacting or taking it personal but i want to say i`m sorry for the bad grammar in the article, i`m mexican, english is not my natural lenguaje, i do what i can Zidane tribal 22:05, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
Have taken on the task of rewriting the plot summary to comply with MoS. Jelli♥Babi S'up 10:21, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
Plot summary rewritten! :D Jelli♥Babi S'up 12:07, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
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Sept 1, 2006 - This article needs some serious spelling/grammar checking.... 74.105.146.115 00:34, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
from VfD:
Tis an excerpt from
Parasite Eve. Redirect, no need to merge. --[[User:Valmi|Valmi
✒]] 03:11, 13 Oct 2004 (UTC)
end moved discussion
I just read through this and it looks like a twelve year-old wrote it. I'm not a great user of grammar either, but can someone PLEASE fix this? I read it and had almost no idea what was being said. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.154.212.92 ( talk • contribs) 22:00, September 9, 2006
I went ahead and rewrote the first 7 paragraphs - unfortunately I am writing from memory about a game I played many years ago, and with only the existing text to go on I can't be sure about the editing from this point on! Anyone else like to take on the rest? EyeSerene 18:38, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
I saw a sentance towards the end that says 'But the Army shows up with lots of guns, helicopters' etc. Asside from the obvious, if I am to remember correctly it was the Marines that show up, not the Army. I'll go give this an edit.
Maybe i`m overreacting or taking it personal but i want to say i`m sorry for the bad grammar in the article, i`m mexican, english is not my natural lenguaje, i do what i can Zidane tribal 22:05, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
Have taken on the task of rewriting the plot summary to comply with MoS. Jelli♥Babi S'up 10:21, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
Plot summary rewritten! :D Jelli♥Babi S'up 12:07, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
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