"Ultimately, Tet was a publicity and media triumph..." (what is the difference between publicity and media? Perhaps just say "publicity triumph");
Its been a while since I wrote this but I think I was trying to highlight the role the media played in this so I unless you really think it an issue I think the current wording could probably remain. What do you think?
Anotherclown (
talk)
22:32, 1 May 2011 (UTC)reply
inconsistent capitalisation "Area of Operations" and then "area of operations";
I think this might be correct, as in some cases I'm using it as a proper noun (and using caps) and in others it isn't. Am I right? If not of course I will amend per your suggestions.
Anotherclown (
talk)
22:32, 1 May 2011 (UTC)reply
"while they were also able to successfully interdict their withdrawal" (a little confusing about subject - "they" and "their" - perhaps clarify one of these);
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
No issues.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
No issues.
It contains
images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have
fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain:
the fair use rationales on the images need to be changed so that they reflect the name change that the article underwent. Currently some of them still mention "Battle of Bien Hoa (1968)".
"Ultimately, Tet was a publicity and media triumph..." (what is the difference between publicity and media? Perhaps just say "publicity triumph");
Its been a while since I wrote this but I think I was trying to highlight the role the media played in this so I unless you really think it an issue I think the current wording could probably remain. What do you think?
Anotherclown (
talk)
22:32, 1 May 2011 (UTC)reply
inconsistent capitalisation "Area of Operations" and then "area of operations";
I think this might be correct, as in some cases I'm using it as a proper noun (and using caps) and in others it isn't. Am I right? If not of course I will amend per your suggestions.
Anotherclown (
talk)
22:32, 1 May 2011 (UTC)reply
"while they were also able to successfully interdict their withdrawal" (a little confusing about subject - "they" and "their" - perhaps clarify one of these);
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
No issues.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
No issues.
It contains
images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have
fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain:
the fair use rationales on the images need to be changed so that they reflect the name change that the article underwent. Currently some of them still mention "Battle of Bien Hoa (1968)".