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I'm currently working on a new draft of this article, which is pretty much 100% new—-the current EERE page has little to it except for the budget numbers, which are outdated, and the EERE mission statement. There are also no sources. So I'm working on a brand new draft that is more detailed and up-to-date than what is currently up here. It'd be lovely if anyone interested in this page could check out the draft I'm working on, and suggest what can be done to improve it. You can see it here: Office of Energy Efficiency and Renewable Energy. Feel free to leave any suggestions at my talk page or at the draft's talk page. Thanks! Elispen ( talk) 21:42, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
Hello, and thanks to User:Elispen for working on this page. I have to emphasize on the sourcing (as it is mentioned above). It is the biggest thing that stands out to me regarding this page. Check out WP:SECONDARY if you haven't already. This article would be greatly strengthened substituting content/evolving towards secondary sources. Nearly all sources are primary sources (from the EERE/DOE/etc.) The Solar Decathalon isn't an independent secondary source, at least, as it is sponsored by EERE. Elispen, it would be super nice if you could incorporate some media coverage, journal references (with DOI's) or whatever. Also, don't worry about editing the page directly. You've nicely declared your COI so feel free to chop away! Thanks. - Wervo ( talk) 01:43, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
I was dissapointed to find that some content that appears useful was completely dropped in the new rewrite so I'm going to reinstate some old material. - Wervo ( talk) 01:56, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
Please note that I will not be editing Office of Energy Efficiency and Renewable Energy or related pages directly, but will post editing suggestions on this article's talk page." I have asked the community for help reviewing and posting the edits to the page. Those edits are in the sandbox at /info/en/?search=User:Ch2017/sandbox
--CH2017 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ch2017 ( talk • contribs) 23:43, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
There is a new acting assistant secretary for the Office of Energy Efficiency and Renewable Energy (EERE) named Daniel Simmons. I would like someone to replace Steve Chalk's name, who is currently listed on the EERE page as acting assistant secretary, with Daniel Simmons. The footnote, which goes to the current org chart, can remain. Would someone from the community kindly make this change? The page is /info/en/?search=Office_of_Energy_Efficiency_and_Renewable_Energy
Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ch2017 ( talk • contribs) 16:16, 14 September 2017 (UTC)
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I'm currently working on a new draft of this article, which is pretty much 100% new—-the current EERE page has little to it except for the budget numbers, which are outdated, and the EERE mission statement. There are also no sources. So I'm working on a brand new draft that is more detailed and up-to-date than what is currently up here. It'd be lovely if anyone interested in this page could check out the draft I'm working on, and suggest what can be done to improve it. You can see it here: Office of Energy Efficiency and Renewable Energy. Feel free to leave any suggestions at my talk page or at the draft's talk page. Thanks! Elispen ( talk) 21:42, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
Hello, and thanks to User:Elispen for working on this page. I have to emphasize on the sourcing (as it is mentioned above). It is the biggest thing that stands out to me regarding this page. Check out WP:SECONDARY if you haven't already. This article would be greatly strengthened substituting content/evolving towards secondary sources. Nearly all sources are primary sources (from the EERE/DOE/etc.) The Solar Decathalon isn't an independent secondary source, at least, as it is sponsored by EERE. Elispen, it would be super nice if you could incorporate some media coverage, journal references (with DOI's) or whatever. Also, don't worry about editing the page directly. You've nicely declared your COI so feel free to chop away! Thanks. - Wervo ( talk) 01:43, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
I was dissapointed to find that some content that appears useful was completely dropped in the new rewrite so I'm going to reinstate some old material. - Wervo ( talk) 01:56, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
Please note that I will not be editing Office of Energy Efficiency and Renewable Energy or related pages directly, but will post editing suggestions on this article's talk page." I have asked the community for help reviewing and posting the edits to the page. Those edits are in the sandbox at /info/en/?search=User:Ch2017/sandbox
--CH2017 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ch2017 ( talk • contribs) 23:43, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
There is a new acting assistant secretary for the Office of Energy Efficiency and Renewable Energy (EERE) named Daniel Simmons. I would like someone to replace Steve Chalk's name, who is currently listed on the EERE page as acting assistant secretary, with Daniel Simmons. The footnote, which goes to the current org chart, can remain. Would someone from the community kindly make this change? The page is /info/en/?search=Office_of_Energy_Efficiency_and_Renewable_Energy
Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ch2017 ( talk • contribs) 16:16, 14 September 2017 (UTC)