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Second section requires cleanup. It reads like a story, it needs an edit (for grammar, spelling, and word choice), and it lacks NPOV. I do not have enough knowledge of the events in question to judge whether they are worth including in the article at all, so I hope that someone with knowledge of the situation will take charge of cleaning this up. Squelchtoad ( talk) 21:05, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- I have no knowledge of the event in question, but I have reworked the text and removed the tags. -- BwB ( talk) 17:48, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
If actual students added the material i just deleted, they better be careful what they add, as the grammar and overall quality of the prose was very poor, which reflects poorly on their school. I would strongly encourage the students at OMI to seek out a teacher who can coordinate with a WP editor/administrator to, as a group, improve this article (if it is notable enough). Mercurywoodrose ( talk) 16:11, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
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Second section requires cleanup. It reads like a story, it needs an edit (for grammar, spelling, and word choice), and it lacks NPOV. I do not have enough knowledge of the events in question to judge whether they are worth including in the article at all, so I hope that someone with knowledge of the situation will take charge of cleaning this up. Squelchtoad ( talk) 21:05, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- I have no knowledge of the event in question, but I have reworked the text and removed the tags. -- BwB ( talk) 17:48, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
If actual students added the material i just deleted, they better be careful what they add, as the grammar and overall quality of the prose was very poor, which reflects poorly on their school. I would strongly encourage the students at OMI to seek out a teacher who can coordinate with a WP editor/administrator to, as a group, improve this article (if it is notable enough). Mercurywoodrose ( talk) 16:11, 24 September 2011 (UTC)