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Sara, You're off to a great start and have pulled together some important information on your topic. The main revisions ahead are to get the entry more in line with its audience/context in Wikipedia, so here are a few elements to consider:
Overall though in terms of substance, your content, your draft is in a good place already. Please touch base with any questions!
AMcClanan ( talk) 20:56, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
-- Sagemw ( talk) 01:25, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
Hi Sara,
Excellent post! You provide thorough description and analysis of the images. Your writing is well connected with other research that builds support for your post. I also appreciated your clear organization of information. For possible revisions, it would be helpful if you used clearer language. For example, try to use the active voice more than the passive voice. It will help clarify your argument and strengthen your post. Otherwise, great job! Madeline Michalk ( talk) 01:51, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
Please address the issues re: sections, it's being an orphan, etc. and email me when the updates have happened by Sunday--thanks!
![]() | This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's
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Sara, You're off to a great start and have pulled together some important information on your topic. The main revisions ahead are to get the entry more in line with its audience/context in Wikipedia, so here are a few elements to consider:
Overall though in terms of substance, your content, your draft is in a good place already. Please touch base with any questions!
AMcClanan ( talk) 20:56, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
-- Sagemw ( talk) 01:25, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
Hi Sara,
Excellent post! You provide thorough description and analysis of the images. Your writing is well connected with other research that builds support for your post. I also appreciated your clear organization of information. For possible revisions, it would be helpful if you used clearer language. For example, try to use the active voice more than the passive voice. It will help clarify your argument and strengthen your post. Otherwise, great job! Madeline Michalk ( talk) 01:51, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
Please address the issues re: sections, it's being an orphan, etc. and email me when the updates have happened by Sunday--thanks!