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Hi LouisAragon. This could do with an infobox. Would you like me to do it, or would you prefer to? Gog the Mild ( talk) 14:33, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
I know nothing about Safavid naming conventions, but is it correct to refer to him as Tokhmaq Khan rather than Ustajlu?
Is there a reason for " Scutari ( Constantinople)" rather than just Constantinople? I nearly changed it but thought it best to check. Gog the Mild ( talk) 15:24, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
What do you think about adding [ one of these] as an image? Gog the Mild ( talk) 15:30, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Al Ameer son ( talk · contribs) 19:58, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article shortly. I gave it a read-through earlier and it looks good from the outset. -- Al Ameer ( talk) 20:04, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
@ LouisAragon: After a few read-throughs, I’ve been hard-pressed to find issues with the article’s prose or comprehensiveness. Though it is short and I’m not too familiar with Safavid history, the article certainly appears to fully cover the interesting career of this Safavid official. It would be good to have known what happened to him after 1583 and how and when he died, but after working on several articles about contemporary Ottoman officials with similar multi-faceted careers (i.e. governors/generals/diplomats), I know it’s very difficult sometimes to find this information. Please address the above points whenever you can and I’ll do a spot-check when I’m in front of my computer. Otherwise, I’ll see if there’s anything else that needs to be addressed. Very good work with this article. — Al Ameer ( talk) 14:59, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
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Mohammad Khan Tokhmaq Ustajlu has been listed as one of the
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please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
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Hi LouisAragon. This could do with an infobox. Would you like me to do it, or would you prefer to? Gog the Mild ( talk) 14:33, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
I know nothing about Safavid naming conventions, but is it correct to refer to him as Tokhmaq Khan rather than Ustajlu?
Is there a reason for " Scutari ( Constantinople)" rather than just Constantinople? I nearly changed it but thought it best to check. Gog the Mild ( talk) 15:24, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
What do you think about adding [ one of these] as an image? Gog the Mild ( talk) 15:30, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Al Ameer son ( talk · contribs) 19:58, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article shortly. I gave it a read-through earlier and it looks good from the outset. -- Al Ameer ( talk) 20:04, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
@ LouisAragon: After a few read-throughs, I’ve been hard-pressed to find issues with the article’s prose or comprehensiveness. Though it is short and I’m not too familiar with Safavid history, the article certainly appears to fully cover the interesting career of this Safavid official. It would be good to have known what happened to him after 1583 and how and when he died, but after working on several articles about contemporary Ottoman officials with similar multi-faceted careers (i.e. governors/generals/diplomats), I know it’s very difficult sometimes to find this information. Please address the above points whenever you can and I’ll do a spot-check when I’m in front of my computer. Otherwise, I’ll see if there’s anything else that needs to be addressed. Very good work with this article. — Al Ameer ( talk) 14:59, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
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