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Reviewer: Steelkamp ( talk · contribs) 03:22, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Hello. I will be reviewing this article. Steelkamp ( talk) 03:22, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Well written
they are missing their platform edges, and the station is not accessible.– Would it make more sense to write
they are missing their platform edges, so the station is not accessible.
The MBTA ended remaining Woburn Branch service on January 30, 1981.– This sentence reads strangely to me. Should it be
The MBTA ended the remaining Woburn Branch service on January 30, 1981, or
The MBTA ended remaining Woburn Branch services on January 30, 1981? Or is this sentence correct in American English? There are several other instances of the word "service" being used like this. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
However, by that time a new station was under development.– Seems weird that this sentence is at the start of a new paragraph, when it references something in the previous paragraph. Maybe rework that sentence, or reconfigure those paragraphs. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
for a reported $560,000– Is the word "reported" necessary here? Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
the first new station on the system since 1982-opened West Natick station.– Replace this with
the first station to open on the system since West Natick station in 1982.Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Peter Pan– Replace this with
Peter Pan Bus Lines. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
A state bill to study reestablishing Mishawum as a full-time stop died in committee in 2002 and 2003.– What does this mean. Can you elaborate on this statement. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
commuter rail service to North Station was disrupted due to security concerns due to North Station's location under the arena.– Too many "due to"s next to each other. Reword to
commuter rail service to North Station was disrupted due to security concerns because North Station is located under the arena.Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
commuter rail service to North Station was disrupted due to security concerns due to North Station's location under the arena.– What does disrupted mean? Were services stopped, or were there just limited services, or were services not running to schedule. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
The parking area at Mishawum was temporarily reopened, with buses numbered as the normally unused route 53 running directly to South Station.– How long did this happen for? Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
The MBTA began planning for transit-oriented development around Mishawum station even before it opened.– Clarify that this is talking about the 1984 opening. Change to
The MBTA began planning for transit-oriented development around Mishawum station even before it opened in 1984.Steelkamp ( talk) 15:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Woburn City Council due to concerns about density.– Were the concerns about the density being too high? Clarify this in the article. Steelkamp ( talk) 15:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for addressing all of this. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Verifiable with no original research
direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons. Given that the infobox image clearly shows both the cut and the level crossing, I can't imagine those statements are likely to be challenged. Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 02:05, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
Broad in its coverage
Article addresses the main points expected in an article about a train station. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Neutral
Article is neutral. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Stable
No edit wars or content disputes are ongoing. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Illustrated, if possible
All images in the article have their copyright statuses tagged. Images are all relevant and have suitable captions. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:17, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Steelkamp ( talk · contribs) 03:22, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Hello. I will be reviewing this article. Steelkamp ( talk) 03:22, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Well written
they are missing their platform edges, and the station is not accessible.– Would it make more sense to write
they are missing their platform edges, so the station is not accessible.
The MBTA ended remaining Woburn Branch service on January 30, 1981.– This sentence reads strangely to me. Should it be
The MBTA ended the remaining Woburn Branch service on January 30, 1981, or
The MBTA ended remaining Woburn Branch services on January 30, 1981? Or is this sentence correct in American English? There are several other instances of the word "service" being used like this. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
However, by that time a new station was under development.– Seems weird that this sentence is at the start of a new paragraph, when it references something in the previous paragraph. Maybe rework that sentence, or reconfigure those paragraphs. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
for a reported $560,000– Is the word "reported" necessary here? Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
the first new station on the system since 1982-opened West Natick station.– Replace this with
the first station to open on the system since West Natick station in 1982.Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Peter Pan– Replace this with
Peter Pan Bus Lines. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
A state bill to study reestablishing Mishawum as a full-time stop died in committee in 2002 and 2003.– What does this mean. Can you elaborate on this statement. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
commuter rail service to North Station was disrupted due to security concerns due to North Station's location under the arena.– Too many "due to"s next to each other. Reword to
commuter rail service to North Station was disrupted due to security concerns because North Station is located under the arena.Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
commuter rail service to North Station was disrupted due to security concerns due to North Station's location under the arena.– What does disrupted mean? Were services stopped, or were there just limited services, or were services not running to schedule. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
The parking area at Mishawum was temporarily reopened, with buses numbered as the normally unused route 53 running directly to South Station.– How long did this happen for? Steelkamp ( talk) 14:53, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
The MBTA began planning for transit-oriented development around Mishawum station even before it opened.– Clarify that this is talking about the 1984 opening. Change to
The MBTA began planning for transit-oriented development around Mishawum station even before it opened in 1984.Steelkamp ( talk) 15:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Woburn City Council due to concerns about density.– Were the concerns about the density being too high? Clarify this in the article. Steelkamp ( talk) 15:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for addressing all of this. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Verifiable with no original research
direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons. Given that the infobox image clearly shows both the cut and the level crossing, I can't imagine those statements are likely to be challenged. Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 02:05, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
Broad in its coverage
Article addresses the main points expected in an article about a train station. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Neutral
Article is neutral. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Stable
No edit wars or content disputes are ongoing. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:23, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Illustrated, if possible
All images in the article have their copyright statuses tagged. Images are all relevant and have suitable captions. The article passes this criteria. Steelkamp ( talk) 05:17, 1 August 2021 (UTC)