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The article has been thoroughly worked over with references added, info updated etc... A Bibliography of Canadian military history has also been created with the main books used. Article still needs a nice Canadian English copy edit and I am working on some words to add about the relationship between the NWMP and the Militia and RCMP and special forces. Moxy ( talk) 23:43, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
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I've read through the article and have a couple of minor suggestions which you might consider. Feel free to ignore if you disagree:
In addition to the above points, I'm seeing a lot of prose, MOS and formatting-related inconsistencies that would definitely be raised at FAC (and prose probably at GAN). If you like, I can do some work with those issues? Nikkimaria ( talk) 01:50, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
Concerns about domestic operations missing from article. Moxy ( talk) 22:03, 28 January 2012 (UTC)
Concerns about missing Cold war: like communism . Moxy ( talk) 01:17, 29 January 2012 (UTC)
I guess we can go over this again but best to just link the final conversation on the matter that we keep pointing to rather then all of them Wikipedia:Non-free content review Iconic image that defines the conflict and been studied .and still talked about ... interviews and all-- Moxy ( talk) 00:03, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
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It seriously damages the reputation of this article if you don't include Canada's involvement in the Kosovo War- I mean, really? Dunutubble ( talk) 16:39, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
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The article has been thoroughly worked over with references added, info updated etc... A Bibliography of Canadian military history has also been created with the main books used. Article still needs a nice Canadian English copy edit and I am working on some words to add about the relationship between the NWMP and the Militia and RCMP and special forces. Moxy ( talk) 23:43, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because I am looking to see if others think the readability, presentation, coverage, neutrality, sourcing are in order as per our policies and general guidelines on this type of subject. The ultimate goal is GA status then FA over time.
Thanks,
Moxy (
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23:44, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
I've read through the article and have a couple of minor suggestions which you might consider. Feel free to ignore if you disagree:
In addition to the above points, I'm seeing a lot of prose, MOS and formatting-related inconsistencies that would definitely be raised at FAC (and prose probably at GAN). If you like, I can do some work with those issues? Nikkimaria ( talk) 01:50, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
Concerns about domestic operations missing from article. Moxy ( talk) 22:03, 28 January 2012 (UTC)
Concerns about missing Cold war: like communism . Moxy ( talk) 01:17, 29 January 2012 (UTC)
I guess we can go over this again but best to just link the final conversation on the matter that we keep pointing to rather then all of them Wikipedia:Non-free content review Iconic image that defines the conflict and been studied .and still talked about ... interviews and all-- Moxy ( talk) 00:03, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
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It seriously damages the reputation of this article if you don't include Canada's involvement in the Kosovo War- I mean, really? Dunutubble ( talk) 16:39, 5 November 2021 (UTC)