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Reviewer: 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk · contribs) -- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
A great article, stable, neutral, comprehensive. I will try to review some minor issues for each section in the article.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
Gorbachev's letter requesting membership of the Communist Party - when was it written?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
The caption of the image says: "Gorbachev on a visit to East Germany in 1966". What is he visiting?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
"He moved Gromyko from his role in foreign policy to that of head of state and replaced Gromyko's former role with his own ally, Eduard Shevardnadze". Clarification needed: Gromyko was moved to the head of state? And that is a lower position than his role in foreign policy? Sheverdnandze was thus appointed at which position?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
"Over the course of the war, 13,000 Soviet soldiers would be killed and there was much opposition to Soviet involvement among both the public and military." Official sources claim that between 14,453 and 26,000 Soviet soldiers died in the war. A range could be added, or the figure dropped altogether. It is also unclear as to why, if the Politburo accepted his decision to withdraw troops from Afghanistan in October 1985, it took all until February 1989 for the troops to do so.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
"Economic problems remained: by the late 1980s there were still widespread shortages of basic goods, rising inflation, and declining living standards." Any clarification on what basic goods were meant?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
Awards and honours are mentioned in the section, but nothing about any monument. I suggest you remove the word "monuments" from the section, if you cannot find any.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 13:10, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
I think the article now meets the GA criteria. I am promoting it, accordingly.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 15:48, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
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Many thanks for taking the time to read through the article and offer your thoughts, 3E1I5S8B9RF7. It is appreciated. Midnightblueowl ( talk) 13:53, 3 January 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk · contribs) -- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
A great article, stable, neutral, comprehensive. I will try to review some minor issues for each section in the article.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
Gorbachev's letter requesting membership of the Communist Party - when was it written?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
The caption of the image says: "Gorbachev on a visit to East Germany in 1966". What is he visiting?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
"He moved Gromyko from his role in foreign policy to that of head of state and replaced Gromyko's former role with his own ally, Eduard Shevardnadze". Clarification needed: Gromyko was moved to the head of state? And that is a lower position than his role in foreign policy? Sheverdnandze was thus appointed at which position?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
"Over the course of the war, 13,000 Soviet soldiers would be killed and there was much opposition to Soviet involvement among both the public and military." Official sources claim that between 14,453 and 26,000 Soviet soldiers died in the war. A range could be added, or the figure dropped altogether. It is also unclear as to why, if the Politburo accepted his decision to withdraw troops from Afghanistan in October 1985, it took all until February 1989 for the troops to do so.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
"Economic problems remained: by the late 1980s there were still widespread shortages of basic goods, rising inflation, and declining living standards." Any clarification on what basic goods were meant?-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 17:39, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
Awards and honours are mentioned in the section, but nothing about any monument. I suggest you remove the word "monuments" from the section, if you cannot find any.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 13:10, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
I think the article now meets the GA criteria. I am promoting it, accordingly.-- 3E1I5S8B9RF7 ( talk) 15:48, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
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Many thanks for taking the time to read through the article and offer your thoughts, 3E1I5S8B9RF7. It is appreciated. Midnightblueowl ( talk) 13:53, 3 January 2020 (UTC)