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As usual, a manufacturer web page is not really suitable for an encyclopedia article. I cleaned it up a little, removed a line of pure advertising, adjusting the bias towards the form of dispensing the company sells, simplifying the sentence structure, and removing many unnecessary words. I would have continued, but I realized a major problem: the overwhelming amount of the text is about dispensing liquids and semi-solids in general, not about microdispensing. There is in fact essentially no material about the actual subject. Maybe the material here can be used elsewhere, after cleaning it, and a proper article written. And in any case it needs references other than the web site. It needs references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. A textbook would be a good choice here. I'll be back to see progress . DGG ( talk) 23:48, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
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I, (Peter Langer), am the author of this article, (microdispensing), and I release its content under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.2 and later.
Only for use on wikipedia!
Retrieved from " http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Microdispensing"
As usual, a manufacturer web page is not really suitable for an encyclopedia article. I cleaned it up a little, removed a line of pure advertising, adjusting the bias towards the form of dispensing the company sells, simplifying the sentence structure, and removing many unnecessary words. I would have continued, but I realized a major problem: the overwhelming amount of the text is about dispensing liquids and semi-solids in general, not about microdispensing. There is in fact essentially no material about the actual subject. Maybe the material here can be used elsewhere, after cleaning it, and a proper article written. And in any case it needs references other than the web site. It needs references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. A textbook would be a good choice here. I'll be back to see progress . DGG ( talk) 23:48, 20 July 2009 (UTC)