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Hello, Jeanne boleyn. O.K., Let´s discuss about Baroness Micaela Almonester de Pontalba article:
1. "Baroness" is not a name, it´s a title. So I think the first article sentence must be: Micaela Almonester de Pontalba, baroness of Pontalba by marriage. Besides this name was not hers all her life. He was born as Micaela Almonester, surely (I have not see her birth certificate) as Micaela Almonester y de la Ronde, like the typical Spanish form to put surnames: Name/s, Paternal Surname y Maternal Surname. So the article introducction must contain this important information.
2. "...one of the most vibrant personalities of that city's history." is a great sentence for a novel, but in my opinion it´s not appropriate for a encyclopedia. It´s not objective.
3. The birth place of Andres Almonaster is Mairena del Alcor (in the past usually written as Mayrena), not "Mayrene".
Well, What do you think about this?
Bye. -- Geriarto ( talk) 22:56, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
Ok, I´m agree. Bye!-- Geriarto ( talk) 14:45, 9 March 2012 (UTC)
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Hello, Jeanne boleyn. O.K., Let´s discuss about Baroness Micaela Almonester de Pontalba article:
1. "Baroness" is not a name, it´s a title. So I think the first article sentence must be: Micaela Almonester de Pontalba, baroness of Pontalba by marriage. Besides this name was not hers all her life. He was born as Micaela Almonester, surely (I have not see her birth certificate) as Micaela Almonester y de la Ronde, like the typical Spanish form to put surnames: Name/s, Paternal Surname y Maternal Surname. So the article introducction must contain this important information.
2. "...one of the most vibrant personalities of that city's history." is a great sentence for a novel, but in my opinion it´s not appropriate for a encyclopedia. It´s not objective.
3. The birth place of Andres Almonaster is Mairena del Alcor (in the past usually written as Mayrena), not "Mayrene".
Well, What do you think about this?
Bye. -- Geriarto ( talk) 22:56, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
Ok, I´m agree. Bye!-- Geriarto ( talk) 14:45, 9 March 2012 (UTC)