Martinus Putuhena is currently a Politics and government good article nominee. Nominated by Juxlos ( talk) at 16:22, 16 May 2024 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article. Short description: Indonesian engineer and politician |
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The result was: promoted by
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Moved to mainspace by Juxlos ( talk). Self-nominated at 10:06, 9 January 2022 (UTC).
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Nominator: Juxlos ( talk · contribs) 16:22, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 00:36, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll have a review written for the article some time this week.
Thebiguglyalien (
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00:36, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
General notes:
Lead:
Putuhena was appointed to the State of East Indonesia initially as a compromise candidate for a security takeover, before the political situation resulted in a complete takeover which he supervised.– If I had only read the lead, I wouldn't know what this meant. It doesn't say what his appointment was or what takeover happened.
He continued to work under the government– This should say what he actually did or what position he held.
Early life and education:
he moved to Tondano to continue his education under a scholarship, and then at an Algemene Middelbare School (AMS) in Yogyakarta– This sentence is throwing me off. It seems like it's saying "he moved to Tondano and then he moved at an Algemene Middelbare School.
"wet" civil engineeringsupposed to have quotations marks in it? Right now it looks like scare quotes.
Public works:
Putuhena was tasked with sabotaging the infrastructure on Lombok, but due to reluctance from the locals the extent of the damage was limited– How exactly did this work? It's not clear what's meant by "sabotaging" or how the locals were involved.
A member of the Indonesian Christian Partyhas several different ideas in it, and it should probably be split into two or three sentences.
East Indonesia:
Later life and career:
Following his return from Indonesia– Where was he returning to? Or is this supposed to say he was returning to Indonesia, in which case where was he returning from?
References:
Martinus Putuhena is currently a Politics and government good article nominee. Nominated by Juxlos ( talk) at 16:22, 16 May 2024 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article. Short description: Indonesian engineer and politician |
A fact from Martinus Putuhena appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 25 January 2022 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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This article is rated B-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk)
06:28, 21 January 2022 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by Juxlos ( talk). Self-nominated at 10:06, 9 January 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
GA toolbox |
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Reviewing |
Nominator: Juxlos ( talk · contribs) 16:22, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 00:36, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll have a review written for the article some time this week.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk)
00:36, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
General notes:
Lead:
Putuhena was appointed to the State of East Indonesia initially as a compromise candidate for a security takeover, before the political situation resulted in a complete takeover which he supervised.– If I had only read the lead, I wouldn't know what this meant. It doesn't say what his appointment was or what takeover happened.
He continued to work under the government– This should say what he actually did or what position he held.
Early life and education:
he moved to Tondano to continue his education under a scholarship, and then at an Algemene Middelbare School (AMS) in Yogyakarta– This sentence is throwing me off. It seems like it's saying "he moved to Tondano and then he moved at an Algemene Middelbare School.
"wet" civil engineeringsupposed to have quotations marks in it? Right now it looks like scare quotes.
Public works:
Putuhena was tasked with sabotaging the infrastructure on Lombok, but due to reluctance from the locals the extent of the damage was limited– How exactly did this work? It's not clear what's meant by "sabotaging" or how the locals were involved.
A member of the Indonesian Christian Partyhas several different ideas in it, and it should probably be split into two or three sentences.
East Indonesia:
Later life and career:
Following his return from Indonesia– Where was he returning to? Or is this supposed to say he was returning to Indonesia, in which case where was he returning from?
References: