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Agree with the previous user and it seems to have gotten worse with the Whitecaps section. Nine points from 1st place? Why not say 5th? Citing an online poll that probably had a sample size of 50? - Anon
Several parts of this article reads like a fluff piece. One95 ( talk) 20:57, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
What are you on about? He's the coach of a soccer team in the MLS. "Head coach" is his title. So what's an MO? --
Walter Görlitz (
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23:52, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
Calm down please. How about "... Is currently the head coach of the soccer team Vancouver Whitecaps ... and has previously been manager of ..." Both Head Coach and Manager are in my eyes a work description, not a profession. Mentoz86 ( talk) 14:55, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
Recent edit is partially good, but when the majority of MLS readers arrive at the page and see football, they are not going to think "association football", they're going to thing "American football". It would be better to not pipe it at all. It deals with the manager/coach issue satisfactorily. -- Walter Görlitz ( talk) 23:38, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
I was able to go through a few offline sources in a quarterly magazine associated with (though not edited by) Martin's father. - The Larbert Old Bulletin A couple of points pertinent to the article - In 2003 Rennie was part of an International Team set up by Ambassadors in Sport (AIS) that toured Africa (Mozambique, Sudan, South Africa) - it's unclear from the article whether he was coaching or playing, though I seem to recall this was after the cruciate ligament problem - Particularly in Sudan this was covered heavily, both by the Sudanese press, but also international news companies like Reuters (though the Reuters online archive seems particularly absent for that period) The Sudan Matches were televised live across the nation and covered on satellite for the whole of North Africa, Middle East and Europe. One game was against the Sudanese national team , the other against Amal Atbara a Sudanese premier team. No word on Cascade Surge, but In a 2006 magazine article Rennie discusses how he is moving to the US permanently in order to be a full time coach for AIS at their Cleveland Base - Coaching, then ultimately as the Director of Football for Ambassadors FC and continuing as director at the same time as he becomes head coach for Cleveland City Stars.. This is significantly different from where the article is now (where we suggest he came back to the U.S. at the offer of Cleveland) I can provide copies of these sources in pdf format to anyone that would like to use them however they see fit. Stuart.Jamieson ( talk) 15:57, 3 April 2012 (UTC)
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Agree with the previous user and it seems to have gotten worse with the Whitecaps section. Nine points from 1st place? Why not say 5th? Citing an online poll that probably had a sample size of 50? - Anon
Several parts of this article reads like a fluff piece. One95 ( talk) 20:57, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
What are you on about? He's the coach of a soccer team in the MLS. "Head coach" is his title. So what's an MO? --
Walter Görlitz (
talk)
23:52, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
Calm down please. How about "... Is currently the head coach of the soccer team Vancouver Whitecaps ... and has previously been manager of ..." Both Head Coach and Manager are in my eyes a work description, not a profession. Mentoz86 ( talk) 14:55, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
Recent edit is partially good, but when the majority of MLS readers arrive at the page and see football, they are not going to think "association football", they're going to thing "American football". It would be better to not pipe it at all. It deals with the manager/coach issue satisfactorily. -- Walter Görlitz ( talk) 23:38, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
I was able to go through a few offline sources in a quarterly magazine associated with (though not edited by) Martin's father. - The Larbert Old Bulletin A couple of points pertinent to the article - In 2003 Rennie was part of an International Team set up by Ambassadors in Sport (AIS) that toured Africa (Mozambique, Sudan, South Africa) - it's unclear from the article whether he was coaching or playing, though I seem to recall this was after the cruciate ligament problem - Particularly in Sudan this was covered heavily, both by the Sudanese press, but also international news companies like Reuters (though the Reuters online archive seems particularly absent for that period) The Sudan Matches were televised live across the nation and covered on satellite for the whole of North Africa, Middle East and Europe. One game was against the Sudanese national team , the other against Amal Atbara a Sudanese premier team. No word on Cascade Surge, but In a 2006 magazine article Rennie discusses how he is moving to the US permanently in order to be a full time coach for AIS at their Cleveland Base - Coaching, then ultimately as the Director of Football for Ambassadors FC and continuing as director at the same time as he becomes head coach for Cleveland City Stars.. This is significantly different from where the article is now (where we suggest he came back to the U.S. at the offer of Cleveland) I can provide copies of these sources in pdf format to anyone that would like to use them however they see fit. Stuart.Jamieson ( talk) 15:57, 3 April 2012 (UTC)
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