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@ Beemer69 This article is a real deal. I appreciate your contributions to Kitana's article and hope you can clean up this messy article too. Thanks. 39.50.240.146 ( talk) 14:02, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
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Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (
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1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses three fair use images with proper rationale. I do believe the Chun-Li/Mai poster may be a bit unnecessary, however.
-Looks good
-"before changing her attire to incorporate a bustier" Is this the intended wording, or is this a typo?
-Looks good
-"Mai has been used extensively by SNK to promote their games, other products ranging from clothing items to condoms, and the company as a whole." This sentence makes very little sense and is very confusing.
-Is the Bahia thesis a reliable source?
-Just need a few clarifications both per above and per the source spotcheck below. Let me know if you have anymore questions. Overall, great work for such a large article. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 ( talk) 00:28, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Took a random selection of sources to verify content for.
11: The site linked in this doesn't seem to reference Mai at all, though I may just be missing where this information can be found.
27: Verifies that Mai appears in Gal Fighters
40: Verifies that Mai appears in Neo Geo Infinite Shooting
46: The citation lacks a link, but the information appears accurate.
51: Neither source refers to Mai being in '97 OL, though she appears in images. If possible, please find a source listing her appearing in the text body, but this shouldn't be too much of an issue overall.
63: Verifies Mai's appearance in Samurai Showdown Slash.
99: Verifies Mai's appearance in the film and her association with Iori Yagami.
103: Verifies Mai's role in the film.
126: Verifies the appearances of Mai's outfit in King of Soldier II.
133: Verifies the appearances of Mai's outfit in Phantasy Star Online 2.
159: Source says what is cited in the article. This citation is a bit trivial though, so I do worry it's inclusion here may be unnecessary.
164: Source says what it is cited for.
186: Does not verify info it is cited for, and instead links to an entirely unrelated article about gambling. This should be fixed.
Earwig detects at max a 17% similarity, which hails from the BTVA cite, and is primarily just the fact both reference the same names and game titles. This shouldn't be an issue.
Not to put a dent in this review—and admittedly, I haven't taken a good look at the whole article, although it does seem quite well written—I don't see a single mention of Mai's development within the lede. With fictional characters, it's important to include things from both the "Production" and "Reception" sections; not just the latter.-- PanagiotisZois ( talk) 14:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Pokelego999 ( talk · contribs) 19:11, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
I will get to this soon.
Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (
talk)
19:11, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses three fair use images with proper rationale. I do believe the Chun-Li/Mai poster may be a bit unnecessary, however.
-Looks good
-"before changing her attire to incorporate a bustier" Is this the intended wording, or is this a typo?
-Looks good
-"Mai has been used extensively by SNK to promote their games, other products ranging from clothing items to condoms, and the company as a whole." This sentence makes very little sense and is very confusing.
-Is the Bahia thesis a reliable source?
-Just need a few clarifications both per above and per the source spotcheck below. Let me know if you have anymore questions. Overall, great work for such a large article. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 ( talk) 00:28, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Took a random selection of sources to verify content for.
11: The site linked in this doesn't seem to reference Mai at all, though I may just be missing where this information can be found.
27: Verifies that Mai appears in Gal Fighters
40: Verifies that Mai appears in Neo Geo Infinite Shooting
46: The citation lacks a link, but the information appears accurate.
51: Neither source refers to Mai being in '97 OL, though she appears in images. If possible, please find a source listing her appearing in the text body, but this shouldn't be too much of an issue overall.
63: Verifies Mai's appearance in Samurai Showdown Slash.
99: Verifies Mai's appearance in the film and her association with Iori Yagami.
103: Verifies Mai's role in the film.
126: Verifies the appearances of Mai's outfit in King of Soldier II.
133: Verifies the appearances of Mai's outfit in Phantasy Star Online 2.
159: Source says what is cited in the article. This citation is a bit trivial though, so I do worry it's inclusion here may be unnecessary.
164: Source says what it is cited for.
186: Does not verify info it is cited for, and instead links to an entirely unrelated article about gambling. This should be fixed.
Earwig detects at max a 17% similarity, which hails from the BTVA cite, and is primarily just the fact both reference the same names and game titles. This shouldn't be an issue.
Not to put a dent in this review—and admittedly, I haven't taken a good look at the whole article, although it does seem quite well written—I don't see a single mention of Mai's development within the lede. With fictional characters, it's important to include things from both the "Production" and "Reception" sections; not just the latter.-- PanagiotisZois ( talk) 14:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC)