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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague ( talk · contribs) 22:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
First of all, I would say the lead has to be a bit longer. It would be at your discretion, but I think we should add a few more sentences about the library, its function or its history. It's a bit thin as is.
For the Cost part of the Infobox, we could add in parentheses the present-day dollar value of the building's cost. A lot of similar articles have this info.
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(parameter 1) not a recognized index.". I suppose the construction of a library is more likely "capital expenses, government expenses, or the personal wealth and expenditure of the rich" but I'm uneasy about putting the value in the article.
Did Carnegie's grant cover part of the cost of the collection, or was the Board of Estimate money the only funding for the books?
"The latter project was headed by Leslie Defer Architect." Seems like it would be Leslie Defer, architect or Leslie Defer Architects
"The renovation also included the addition of an African American Heritage Center." Heritage Center would be lower case, unless it is the title of the structure in which case you would be referring to "the" Center, not a/an center
Lastly, any info on the collection? Any noteworthy pieces or pretty standard stuff?
Well-done article on a really cool topic (the Carnegie libraries). Should be ready for GA soon.
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22:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
Macon Library has been listed as one of the
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague ( talk · contribs) 22:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
First of all, I would say the lead has to be a bit longer. It would be at your discretion, but I think we should add a few more sentences about the library, its function or its history. It's a bit thin as is.
For the Cost part of the Infobox, we could add in parentheses the present-day dollar value of the building's cost. A lot of similar articles have this info.
|index=US-NGDPPC
(parameter 1) not a recognized index.". I suppose the construction of a library is more likely "capital expenses, government expenses, or the personal wealth and expenditure of the rich" but I'm uneasy about putting the value in the article.
Did Carnegie's grant cover part of the cost of the collection, or was the Board of Estimate money the only funding for the books?
"The latter project was headed by Leslie Defer Architect." Seems like it would be Leslie Defer, architect or Leslie Defer Architects
"The renovation also included the addition of an African American Heritage Center." Heritage Center would be lower case, unless it is the title of the structure in which case you would be referring to "the" Center, not a/an center
Lastly, any info on the collection? Any noteworthy pieces or pretty standard stuff?
Well-done article on a really cool topic (the Carnegie libraries). Should be ready for GA soon.
QatarStarsLeague (
talk)
22:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)