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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 ( talk · contribs) 00:15, 20 October 2023 (UTC) reply

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR): d ( copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a ( major aspects): b ( focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Added sportspeople from Nashua cat. I know he is already in the baseball one, but he should be in both until a football one is made. Also added army, St. John's University School of Law alumni and American lawyer cats
• Link fort warren WY?
  • Linked.
• Probably couldn't find stats for his college career, right? Being a center and from the 40s, I don't really expect any.
  • Wasn't able to find any.
• "Eastern College Football All-Star team which" comma after team
  • Done.

That's all I think. Very nice work. WikiOriginal-9 ( talk) 00:34, 20 October 2023 (UTC) reply

• Also, I suggest archiving the ebay source for the image because that is not going to last. WikiOriginal-9 ( talk) 00:37, 20 October 2023 (UTC) reply
  • Archived. @ WikiOriginal-9:. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:18, 21 October 2023 (UTC) reply
    • All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 ( talk) 07:18, 22 October 2023 (UTC) reply