The plot is currently extremely overdetailed containing elements that are only really relevant at the time they occur in-game without adding much overall. The point of a Wikipedia page is to only detail plot that's necessary to get full understanding of the overarching plot. I removed a lot of fluff, but it was just reverted so I think this needs to be discussed. I'll go over the removals I made below, please discuss this and let me know why you disagree.
- Barracuda base being (to quote) "an air-raid shelter turned into a homeless camp, counterfeit goods shopping/bidding center" makes no difference to the overall plot
- The part where it's mentioned that Yamai's men betray him and there's an assault on his hideout doesn't matter, overall. We don't need to know this to understand how the story is progressing.
- There's a lot of detail about Ebina's past that feels largely irrelevant to someone reading to get a basic understanding of the narrative. The important parts are that he resents the Yakuza and that he's Arakawa's son. Perhaps a little more could be added to what I'd trimmed it to, but it's still overly detailed
- The stuff about Eiji, the mob and being led to the police station before Kasuga is knocked out doesn't matter. All that matters is that he turns himself in
Just my two cents anyway, the plot section is far too long overall and really needs some of the fat trimming. LightSamus ( talk) 01:37, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
I hear you, but there's too much. Stop re-adding deleted stuff, MORE needs to be removed, not less. If you want a full in-depth analysis of the plot, use the Yakuza wiki or whatever instead. LightSamus ( talk) 14:59, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
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The plot is currently extremely overdetailed containing elements that are only really relevant at the time they occur in-game without adding much overall. The point of a Wikipedia page is to only detail plot that's necessary to get full understanding of the overarching plot. I removed a lot of fluff, but it was just reverted so I think this needs to be discussed. I'll go over the removals I made below, please discuss this and let me know why you disagree.
- Barracuda base being (to quote) "an air-raid shelter turned into a homeless camp, counterfeit goods shopping/bidding center" makes no difference to the overall plot
- The part where it's mentioned that Yamai's men betray him and there's an assault on his hideout doesn't matter, overall. We don't need to know this to understand how the story is progressing.
- There's a lot of detail about Ebina's past that feels largely irrelevant to someone reading to get a basic understanding of the narrative. The important parts are that he resents the Yakuza and that he's Arakawa's son. Perhaps a little more could be added to what I'd trimmed it to, but it's still overly detailed
- The stuff about Eiji, the mob and being led to the police station before Kasuga is knocked out doesn't matter. All that matters is that he turns himself in
Just my two cents anyway, the plot section is far too long overall and really needs some of the fat trimming. LightSamus ( talk) 01:37, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
I hear you, but there's too much. Stop re-adding deleted stuff, MORE needs to be removed, not less. If you want a full in-depth analysis of the plot, use the Yakuza wiki or whatever instead. LightSamus ( talk) 14:59, 7 February 2024 (UTC)