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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 22:28, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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nickname "Thor," the German god of thunder,, I'm thinking parenthesis would be better here
Nice work, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:21, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
He was the second-youngest of four brothers who played football; both his brothers Ed and Joe each played at Georgetown, the latter also played professionally, and John through at least high schoolto
He was the second-youngest of four brothers who played football; both of his brothers—Ed and Joe—each played at Georgetown. The latter also played professionally and the former through at least high schoolbut that makes the sentence incorrect; I may have been a bit sloppy in writing that part, but what I meant to communicate in that sentence was that Leo was the second-youngest of four brothers, with Ed and Joe both playing at Georgetown, Joe also playing professionally, and John, the youngest, playing through at least high school. Can you think of a good way to word it? Thanks. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 18:11, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
two of his brothers—Ed and Joe—each played at Georgetown, with Joe continuing on to play professionally. The youngest, John, played football at least through high school.« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:46, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 22:28, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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nickname "Thor," the German god of thunder,, I'm thinking parenthesis would be better here
Nice work, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:21, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
He was the second-youngest of four brothers who played football; both his brothers Ed and Joe each played at Georgetown, the latter also played professionally, and John through at least high schoolto
He was the second-youngest of four brothers who played football; both of his brothers—Ed and Joe—each played at Georgetown. The latter also played professionally and the former through at least high schoolbut that makes the sentence incorrect; I may have been a bit sloppy in writing that part, but what I meant to communicate in that sentence was that Leo was the second-youngest of four brothers, with Ed and Joe both playing at Georgetown, Joe also playing professionally, and John, the youngest, playing through at least high school. Can you think of a good way to word it? Thanks. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 18:11, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
two of his brothers—Ed and Joe—each played at Georgetown, with Joe continuing on to play professionally. The youngest, John, played football at least through high school.« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:46, 25 August 2023 (UTC)