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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 14:10, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
OK, I'll take this on. I have a few points that will need addressing. It needs a little work before it n be passed, but I can't see anything fundamental. Responses (in Italics) follow your comments.
All in all, I'd say this is a very nicely put-together article on a very interesting man. The section headers are put to good use so that readers aren't confronted with a wall of text and it makes good use of images where they're available. I think with a few hours' work, this should easily meet the GA criteria and there's definitely potential to go on to FAC in the not-too-distant future. Before that, though, I'd suggest you need to fill out more detail in the references (publishers, works, publication dates, accessdates and the red links will need to be removed or created. I'll watch this page and the article , but do feel free to drop me a line on my talk page if you need clarification on anything- I might not be able to respond immediately because I've got a few reviews on at the minute, but I'll get there! HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 14:10, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 14:10, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
OK, I'll take this on. I have a few points that will need addressing. It needs a little work before it n be passed, but I can't see anything fundamental. Responses (in Italics) follow your comments.
All in all, I'd say this is a very nicely put-together article on a very interesting man. The section headers are put to good use so that readers aren't confronted with a wall of text and it makes good use of images where they're available. I think with a few hours' work, this should easily meet the GA criteria and there's definitely potential to go on to FAC in the not-too-distant future. Before that, though, I'd suggest you need to fill out more detail in the references (publishers, works, publication dates, accessdates and the red links will need to be removed or created. I'll watch this page and the article , but do feel free to drop me a line on my talk page if you need clarification on anything- I might not be able to respond immediately because I've got a few reviews on at the minute, but I'll get there! HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 14:10, 1 April 2010 (UTC)