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Greetings, thanks for your additions! A few pointers: ideally information should be referenced from a reputable publication. Consider using books.google.com to see if any non-fiction works can verify the information you have about the village. Second, when using culturally-specific terms like urs or mazar, either
wikilink them so non-Pakistani readers understand what they mean, explain the word in parentheses after, or if applicable use a more general word like "tomb" or "memorial ceremony". One last thing, please do ensure editors don't insert personal bias into the writing. Statements like "a martyr who fought bravely against the Indians" is biased towards the Pakistani perspective. For neutrality consider instead "was killed in the
Indo-Pakistani War of 1971. Thanks!
MatthewVanitas (
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18:53, 11 August 2009 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Pakistan, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Pakistan on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.PakistanWikipedia:WikiProject PakistanTemplate:WikiProject PakistanPakistan articles
Greetings, thanks for your additions! A few pointers: ideally information should be referenced from a reputable publication. Consider using books.google.com to see if any non-fiction works can verify the information you have about the village. Second, when using culturally-specific terms like urs or mazar, either
wikilink them so non-Pakistani readers understand what they mean, explain the word in parentheses after, or if applicable use a more general word like "tomb" or "memorial ceremony". One last thing, please do ensure editors don't insert personal bias into the writing. Statements like "a martyr who fought bravely against the Indians" is biased towards the Pakistani perspective. For neutrality consider instead "was killed in the
Indo-Pakistani War of 1971. Thanks!
MatthewVanitas (
talk)
18:53, 11 August 2009 (UTC)reply