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Perhaps it should be noted that L.A.M.B is quite expensive (compared to other clothing stores like Forever 21 or Mervyn's)? I mean, has anyone looked at the site? All the clothes are overpriced. $60 at minimum for a screen t-shirt, $110+ for a sweater or a pair of jeans on average... ― LADY GALAXY ★彡 Refill/ lol 19:52, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
I've cleaned up the article so far, although I think that it needs more background information. Therefore, I've added an expand tag. FMB 00:51, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
I saw your message on WP:FASHION and did an overhaul of the article. A few remaining concerns: the fashion shows section was kind of weird, and was kind of doing two separate things. In one sense, fashion shows are a spectacle and a publicity stunt (e.g. bouncing cars, and the comments from the NYFW organizer). In another, they're just examples of the line's collections and evolving aesthetic. I might split that up into two sections, with what the clothes look like going into the aesthetics section (which would benefit from an overview of what the clothes look like in general, not just during one specific show) and the cars and that sort of thing going into the promotions section. I also think you need to work on picking better facts to put in the lead so it flows as a summary. I cut it down too short but wasn't finished and was going to add more back later. I think as is it's a bit long considering the article isn't too long to begin with. I need to get to doing more productive things in real life but good luck finishing cleaning this up! Calliopejen1 15:54, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
Indianescence 16:09, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
Please give me time. I promise. Thank you so much! Indianescence 11:35, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
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Some of this article is in past tense with no mention of the business closing. Mystery6666 ( talk) 05:35, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
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Perhaps it should be noted that L.A.M.B is quite expensive (compared to other clothing stores like Forever 21 or Mervyn's)? I mean, has anyone looked at the site? All the clothes are overpriced. $60 at minimum for a screen t-shirt, $110+ for a sweater or a pair of jeans on average... ― LADY GALAXY ★彡 Refill/ lol 19:52, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
I've cleaned up the article so far, although I think that it needs more background information. Therefore, I've added an expand tag. FMB 00:51, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
I saw your message on WP:FASHION and did an overhaul of the article. A few remaining concerns: the fashion shows section was kind of weird, and was kind of doing two separate things. In one sense, fashion shows are a spectacle and a publicity stunt (e.g. bouncing cars, and the comments from the NYFW organizer). In another, they're just examples of the line's collections and evolving aesthetic. I might split that up into two sections, with what the clothes look like going into the aesthetics section (which would benefit from an overview of what the clothes look like in general, not just during one specific show) and the cars and that sort of thing going into the promotions section. I also think you need to work on picking better facts to put in the lead so it flows as a summary. I cut it down too short but wasn't finished and was going to add more back later. I think as is it's a bit long considering the article isn't too long to begin with. I need to get to doing more productive things in real life but good luck finishing cleaning this up! Calliopejen1 15:54, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
Indianescence 16:09, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
Please give me time. I promise. Thank you so much! Indianescence 11:35, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
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Some of this article is in past tense with no mention of the business closing. Mystery6666 ( talk) 05:35, 19 July 2023 (UTC)