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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 09:10, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
I would normally quick-fail any nomination that had uncited sentences. This is the case with this nomination. On the basis that these may have been overlooked, I will give the nominator seven days to cite all uncited material, otherwise I will fail the nomination. Peacemaker67 ( crack... thump) 09:10, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Unnecessary detail throughout
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | I have concerns about the licensing of some images and the use of NFRs, I suggest you go right through all the image licensing and check it is all valid, and even get advice from
WP:IMAGEHELP
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Failing on criteria 1a., not having completed a full review against all criteria. I strongly recommend this article is taken to peer review and through a Guild copyedit before re-nominating for GA. Regards, Peacemaker67 ( crack... thump) 05:37, 21 November 2015 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 09:10, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
I would normally quick-fail any nomination that had uncited sentences. This is the case with this nomination. On the basis that these may have been overlooked, I will give the nominator seven days to cite all uncited material, otherwise I will fail the nomination. Peacemaker67 ( crack... thump) 09:10, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Unnecessary detail throughout
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | I have concerns about the licensing of some images and the use of NFRs, I suggest you go right through all the image licensing and check it is all valid, and even get advice from
WP:IMAGEHELP
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Failing on criteria 1a., not having completed a full review against all criteria. I strongly recommend this article is taken to peer review and through a Guild copyedit before re-nominating for GA. Regards, Peacemaker67 ( crack... thump) 05:37, 21 November 2015 (UTC) |